like poems?
Ok i know theres an art section for this crap but who really looks there anyways.
So i wrote two poems during the summer and well here they are
This is my first poem, so i dont know who good it really is.
Lazy Hazy Days of Summer by Jay
summer night im so bored
walk on over to her front door
ring the bell her she comes
now its time to have some fun
grab her hand away we go
above our heads flies the crow
drive up to the moutain peak
i grab the knife that i have sneaked
stab her 19 times of gore
now she lie apon moutain floor
and thats the first one. so critique it please, and maybe ill give my poem that is dedicated and inspired by Ted Bundy
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IM DIRECTING THIS F*CKING MOO-VAY!
As I was going up the stairs, I met a man who wasn't there. He wasn't there again today, I wish I wish he'd go away .
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