I am placing myself in your hands people. I am interested to see what everyone thinks about the two stories i have online:
Bearwood
Father Dillon's Funeral
Im kind of looking for a film-critic's view of these, if the flow is good, is there enough character developement fo rthe right characters, etc. It suddenly occurred to me that i level a lot of judgenment toward film writers, and i like to be a "Practice what you preach" kind of guy.