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Old 12-23-2004, 06:46 AM
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Intrigued But Nervous...I Need Advice From You Guys...AGAIN

Okay...Some guy that says he knows me, maybe from one of the clubs, but I have NO clue who he is...Sent me THIS...

One night in Erlanger long ago ...

A braggant wind
beats against my window
the air is fresh with
impending snow
once tasted
long ago
in the solitude
of a Mid-Western winter

I was in a place
where I was anonymous,
condemned
in the eyes
of one hundred strangers

I sought solace
in the embrace of night
and caught you
out of the corner
or my sight

Deep sharp eyes
burning like flames

hot blood spilled
against the cold
Kentucky ground
and melted
into the soil
like black snowflakes

I have been writing this
for one hundred years
and I shall write it
longer still

No matter
what the world
will take from me
this memory
will stay
forever
like a ghost

-Jon


All that I know about him is that he's 31 and lives close to me

I LOVE this poem...

What should I do?...What would YOU do?...I feel kinda bad for not remembering this guy...But, if I forgot him, maybe there was a reason:confused:



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