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Old 11-02-2004, 08:05 PM
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Originally posted by Chainsaw Guy
I think ill go with the lonley boy who tries to kill a girl but gets caught and escapes
this lonely boys name is Herbert? the girl in question is Matilda. evil lil bitch she is. Herbert is so lonely because Matilda is always playing practical jokes, and usually at his expense. One day Herbert decides he's had enough. Sneaks up behind Matilda and knocks her out, drags her to the basement and decides that the best way to get rid of her is to cut her up Soprano's style. While preparing his scene, Matilda wakes up, startled, wondering what the hell is going on, but notices she is in a basement, and she can see Herbert at a workbench though her eyes are blurry from concusion.

She attempts to flee, but Herbert kicks her feet out from under her, she falls to the floor with a sickening thud. She lets out a scream loud enough to wake the dead. A person walking their dog out in front of the house hears the noise and comes to take a look. Herbert turns off all the lights, and places a foot on the center of her back, keeping her still, but slowly pressing the air from her lungs, keeping her ability to scream again at a minimum.






here ya go, feel free to use it or not... just tryin to help
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