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yoz
umm i know but maybe at that time i thought it was a good story... but hey i know that i am gonna get better if i have critics ;) ..
k another story i worked on, it started like this.. that there is this coach found by the police and inside its all covered by blood and all the passenger are missing.. then all of a sudden a noise is heard in the luggage section of the coach.. when the police investigates it turns out to be a little boy of about 9 years old... now i am working on what happens next maybe someone can help... i was thinking that maybe it turns out that the boy turns into something and devours the passengers or something... if someone has a better idea... so write to me..
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