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Excellent work, Andy. You've set a nice pace to the story, especially by opening in one time with a lead in to the flashback. It drew me out of the present until the last line, which suddenly brought me back to what was happening with the boy in the attic. Keep it up.
CK
By the way, nine was giddy for me to point out a mispelling/typo error I found in it. "stopped, wondering hat a child’s ". If I was any less of a reader, I probably would've lost my train of thought and stopped reading altogether LOL Glad I didn't.
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