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Old 07-21-2004, 08:58 PM
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Re: my poem

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Originally posted by friday13thfan
heres a poem i did for school so it is a litttle toned down

The Valley

I told her not to go,
A pair of evil eyes showed,
She did not see them
It moved to a tree stem
I cried to her “stop”,
It was on the tree top,
Then she found a valley
It was like being in a New York alley,
It followed her,
She began to stir
She saw it in the moonlight,
It was a shire fright,
She ran for her life,
Its claws were like knifes,
She should have listened,
Now she is wishing,
That she hadn’t going into the valley,
the point of this was to tell u that this was really great...and stupid me:p i 4got 2 put it in my last post:eek:
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