Hmmmm... I would say, at least out of what i have posted online, that
Gloom is my best. At leaast, it is the hardest I have tried to be consistent with the actual quality of my writing as well as the content, where as usually I just trust my instincts with english and try to make the story itself the most important thing.
i have had it torn apart before, and have made many improvements, but until it is published in a book, there is always room for improvement :)