short film Mary Says Goodnight
 

Hey guys, I posted my first short film here recently and figured Id post my 2nd short film which I just finished. It's called Mary Says Goodnight. I hope some people will check it out.

http://youtu.be/QvIpm9Shfrg

Not a bad 2nd offering

Pros
Liked the B&W
Lighting was consistent
Actress did a good job

Cons
Run time
Some scenes went on a bit too long (stirring glass, pouring liquor, counting pills etc)
Some of the shots were shadowy
The payoff didnt have any umpf to it

I think when you have a slow buildup like this film you have to have a payoff worth the run time.

Keep it going, I look forward to more.