My book for FREE just want opinions!! (Pretty please?)
 

Serious horror fans, I am recruiting you to download a free copy of my horror story. It's episode #1 in the series, so there are what seems to be "plot holes". Rest assured, all questions are answered in upcoming episodes.

Just looking for some honest feedback. Nothing more. 100% free for everyone, forever :)

guess nobody is interested :(:o:(

Give me time... I'll try and get to it.

Got an actual link to it? I've copied and pasted both links you had and they take me everywhere but to the story.
I'd like to read it and give feedback, if I could find it.:)

oh. sorry. The link is in my siggy. :)


http://www.lulu.com/ckhoffmanf

the download version of the only book listed is free.

Sorry about the confusion. I hope everyone likes it. Currently working on the finishing touches for episode two

You should probably post the plot here. By your subject matter alone some people will or won't be interested. Tease us. Titillate us. Don't just lay down and tell us to get it over with.

Chelsea!

Your story was badass!!

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!

Aside from a few words being used incorrectly due to spell check, I didn't see anything really wrong with it. An example is "food" instead of "foot". :) Nothing a quick double check won't fix.

Best of luck to you and your writing. If you have more books in this series, please post them here so I can read more.

-Chris