Short Horror Film
 

Hey guys, I just made a short film for a filmmaking contest out in Sacramento. I'm just looking for some feedback or suggestions and thought this would be a good place to start. Here's the link, the competition required a 30 second intro and to film the last 6 minutes of a supposed feature film.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu01E8j3r18

Thanks!

Not bad.

What happens to the guy after he gets stabbed in the eye? He kind of just disappears.

A couple of the shots are way too dark. I know it's at night, but a couple times I couldn't see ANYTHING on the screen- it was just black.

Hey dude I thought that short was actually pretty fucking cool. NE it might have been the screen you were watching it on because for the most part I saw everything you needed to see happening. I never once felt lost or not sure what was happening.

Great job man.

You should totally check out my short flick if you ever get the chance. Send me a PM and I will give you the link if you are interested.

That's possible.