A litle bit of self promotion
 

I've never really been one to pimp myself too much, but i figured i'd link over to a little horror piece i wrote when i was 19 and see what everyone thinks. This is actually the first short story i ever finished.

Bearwood

Give me you opinions. If you are obviously being a jerk i will just ignore you, so say what you feel.

very good dude, I enjoyed it

only thing that bothered me was that you talked about a bear that killed those people years ago, it would have been more misterious if you just said they were killed brutaly or something
but hey, it's still a very cool story
keep em writing, I got your site in my favs

Sweet! Thanks..

Especially for the criticism. I've been writing for a while with little feedback. We'llsee how that pans out in the next rev. :)

Oh yeah, i was reading a lot of Dean Koontz when it was written, so I had a tendancy to overexplain.

that definatlly wasn't a problem dude, all writers do it, it's cool