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Forever Lost
The night is quiet..the moon is high
theres nowhere left to go, A lonely child does walk alone just searching for her home, She wipes a tear as time goes by confused the poor child seem. Not understanding why her pressence bought from her mum a scream, Does she not love me anymore..? Does she not even care..? Does she not even realise.. that I am standing here..? Without a word the child does leave then searches out her name, And after just one final look.. does sink back to her grave. |
That is so sad, it may be short but it's so well written that i can actually feel that child's pain
you write good poems stubborn, keep it up |
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