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thehalk 10-23-2003 03:30 PM
the first kill
 
im writen a movie it is really long and i haven't finished it so im goin to tell u how the 1st kill goes


there is a scienticest or doctor and a lady in a room.micheal myers is on the table (sorta like a morgeu).the man soules michael myer head on.the gurl asks do u want coffie. the man says no. the lady then leaves the man goes to the sienc and washes his hands.as he washes his hands and puts on gloves.myers sites up.when the man turns he gets grabed by the throad.myers chokes him ,and slams his head in to a chout rack on the door.the mans eyes stick out the sockets.myers then grabes a knife ,and sabes it through the mans throad.the knife goes through the throad and door.myers then pushes the mans shoulders down ,and his head come right off.

Tony 10-24-2003 05:07 AM
Brutal. So are you picking up where Resurrection left of sort of?

Killer Clown#1 10-24-2003 05:14 AM
Re: the first kill
 
Quote:
Originally posted by thehalk
im writen a movie it is really long and i haven't finished it so im goin to tell u how the 1st kill goes


there is a scienticest or doctor and a lady in a room.micheal myers is on the table (sorta like a morgeu).the man soules michael myer head on.the gurl asks do u want coffie. the man says no. the lady then leaves the man goes to the sienc and washes his hands.as he washes his hands and puts on gloves.myers sites up.when the man turns he gets grabed by the throad.myers chokes him ,and slams his head in to a chout rack on the door.the mans eyes stick out the sockets.myers then grabes a knife ,and sabes it through the mans throad.the knife goes through the throad and door.myers then pushes the mans shoulders down ,and his head come right off.
WHAT???:confused:

pbenvin 10-24-2003 05:23 AM
Good God.

thehalk 10-24-2003 01:01 PM
im sorry 4 the miss spellin i was typen it fast sorry um im not acturly usen resorection

HalkX 10-24-2003 05:33 PM
that kill is hot

ShamSham04 10-24-2003 07:58 PM
Pretty cool kill, but I predicted Michael sitting up. Been used many times... even in other films. IE. Jason X

Anyway, I'd like to actually read the first scene with this kill without any grammar errors. :)

thehalk 10-25-2003 04:56 PM
well i'll work on it n show u it with no errors

spyk_ 10-28-2003 01:23 AM
Re: the first kill
 
Quote:
Originally posted by thehalk
im writen a movie it is really long and i haven't finished it so im goin to tell u how the 1st kill goes


there is a scienticest or doctor and a lady in a room.micheal myers is on the table (sorta like a morgeu).the man soules michael myer head on.the gurl asks do u want coffie. the man says no. the lady then leaves the man goes to the sienc and washes his hands.as he washes his hands and puts on gloves.myers sites up.when the man turns he gets grabed by the throad.myers chokes him ,and slams his head in to a chout rack on the door.the mans eyes stick out the sockets.myers then grabes a knife ,and sabes it through the mans throad.the knife goes through the throad and door.myers then pushes the mans shoulders down ,and his head come right off.
Ouch

Ulyaoth 10-28-2003 04:48 AM
Re: the first kill
 
Quote:
Originally posted by thehalk
there is a scienticest or doctor and a lady in a room.micheal myers is on the table (sorta like a morgeu).the man soules michael myer head on.the gurl asks do u want coffie. the man says no. the lady then leaves the man goes to the sienc and washes his hands.as he washes his hands and puts on gloves.myers sites up.when the man turns he gets grabed by the throad.myers chokes him ,and slams his head in to a chout rack on the door.the mans eyes stick out the sockets.myers then grabes a knife ,and sabes it through the mans throad.the knife goes through the throad and door.myers then pushes the mans shoulders down ,and his head come right off.
That'd have been a pretty scary kill, if the amount of grammar errors weren't even scarier.

Seriously, my eeeeeeeeeeeeyesssss

MichaelMyers 11-01-2003 02:14 PM
It has potential...

moonsorrow 11-11-2003 08:54 AM
brutal, i like it...the loosing of the head was a little to much though, just end it with the stab thats beautifull.

thehalk 11-11-2003 12:49 PM
the reson i used the loseing of the head was i thought it would be cool to see the head stuck to the door n all the vanes n stuff

FreddyFan 11-11-2003 05:18 PM
Pretty cool death thehalk. It's brilliant. Tell us the other kills in this horror movie you're writing and please try to type good. I'm getting tired of not being able to know wat you're talking about.

thehalk 11-17-2003 12:07 PM
if u want i can tell u the seconed 1 but it isn't as good as the 1st 1 but the other r

FreddyFan 11-30-2003 07:27 PM
sure. that would be good.

ds_spoon 12-17-2003 09:35 AM
that kill is brutal but dont you think the loosing of the head is a little over the top for the first kill i mean nearing the end or half way threw is fine but the first kill???
and please check your spelling next time

Killer Clown#1 12-17-2003 09:50 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by ds_spoon
please check your spelling next time
He always spells like that:o :rolleyes:

avenger00soul 12-17-2003 10:07 AM
The Halk actually IM'd me yesterday and I believe he's working on another one. I don't know if he'll be back to post it though.

thehalk 12-29-2003 06:27 PM
yo I'm going to rewrite the story I was write in whitch I told u the 1st kill because the story was erased so if u still wan't me to write I'm thinking up a new story so I wan't to here yea's or nay's

MichaelMyers 01-02-2004 08:22 PM
Yea.

thehalk 01-03-2004 09:26 AM
I think i remember the 2ed n 3ed kill I liked the 3ed better
I could teel u the 3ed 1

LegionFilms 01-03-2004 04:28 PM
Where's Sam?


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