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Any Lyricists Here?
How about our lyric/poetry writers on here huh? Anyone got some lyrics to share?
I'll go first, from a new song im workin on: Will you look where we're headed, Christ, look where we've been. Hold your flag up high, in pride, and Bury our children. Thats probably gonna be the chorus (think "wish you were here") anywho, anyone else got anything to contribute? |
Heres some
Will you come with me my darling Flying high were in the clear Always dreaming of your smile walk the night with me and hold me (tight)harmony Through it all youve always been there Now I know that we have made it will you come with me my darling walk the night with me and hold me tight. Walk the night with me and hold me tight. Walk the night with me and hold me tight As we find our way together Ill be thinking always of you tell me that you never leave me take my hand and let me lead you will you come with me my darling walk the night with me and hold me tight. walk the night with me and hold me tight walk the night with me and hold me tight. What do you think? |
Nice job, i like the harmony note there, helped me picture it alot more like a song....it IS a song right?...id like to get some mp3 action on it if it is....pretty nice little love ballad ya got there Mr.psycho....
Alright since its just you and me on this site writing lyrics apparently, ill go with a love ballad to match ya.... One Lost Moment Verse1 Too broken, To even try, Pretend this love, is a lie. Transcend the pain we both knew *wispered* (everytime.....i close my eyes...) I Still See You Bridge -- (waltz) See you dance... I still see you... See you dance... Verse 2 Somehow we, Got lost at sea. Desperatly close to the shore. Abandonded our ship premature. *wispered (everytime.....i close my eyes....) I Still See Your... Bridge2--(waltz) Shadow. Dance across.....this.....wall. Something so quaint and tivial's what i miss...most...of all. Chorus - Heavy guitar I'll never stop believing in you... I'll never stop believing in you... Through all the shit you put me through, I'll never stop believing in you... Outro For a moment there.....i lost myself in you, For a moment........there was nothing i wouldn't do. For a moment there.....i lost myself in you, For a moment.........there was nothing i couldn't do......for you. Well? whatcha think? |
snif... snif...
sorry what was the question ? :p seriously though... very beautiful you guys. |
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No seriously, thanks alot Hellfire....i wish we could get some more action in this thread tho.....no lyricists here:( |
i've been writing since i was a kid but i don't consider myself a lyricist... just screwing around, writing what comes into my head... not going to post that shit here to get the hell flamed outta me :D :p and i'm probably not alone on this !
so kudos to you guys for daring to dare ! lol |
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Just bumping this thread for any members who dont suck and look in the music forum:p...
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ok arioch, since you're so set on keeping this thread alive ( lol ), here's a little something i thought of :
hey loneliness step through my door i've tasted you i'm ready for a little more hey lost highway let's go for a ride i'm free for anything yeah, i'm ready to slide |
Hey i like it Hellfire....nice personification given to the highway and loneliness....very classy....goodform...
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damn ex !! lol
was thinking of it as a song, but i can't write music for the life of me. i always wonder how musicians come up with such great melodies. |
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Do you play any instruments HF? |
what's hard about melody, for me anyway, is trying to come up with something original. i almost always have a melody i've already heard in mind when i think of lyrics.
i play, or rather played the... eh hem... flute. shut up ! i am now in the process of learning how to play the drums. :o like... so much cooler :p |
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you mean to tell me that you were the cool little kid in music class who went directly into playing the guitar ?? i doubt it ! :p |
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LMAO !!!!!!! funny shit !!
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Zombie outbreak
By The Psychos Every bodies running scared I dont know if I should care Im pulling on my hair Then theres that sound The dead are rising from the ground Because its a (Chorus) Zombie outbreak I dont know how much I can take Theyre all around I make no sound Lock the door behind you What can you do? The dead are walking everywhere Dont even dare (Chorus) What can I do? What can I do? What can I do?!!!! Im running fast as I can Theyre around the bend This is the end There is no more sound that was one i just wrote so what do you guys think |
something i did a while ago...kinda sux
i'm hiding on the surface with nothing behind my purpose i'm running in the face of battle with no war in mind the tempurtures rising, the sun in the sky burns the brightness of the glares is enough to make my stomach turn i'm mentally stable, although i'm told to be crazy i'm not broken, i just don't work right with the right frame of mind, i could live on this earth in the face of the battle of geneisis theres no where to run, no where to hide, it's hard enough to take a piss my sweats dripping down my face like the blood on my head i can't think, or remember the last time i was fed the cold resistance of the enemy wears me down i'm not giving up till i've killed every fucker |
Nice stuff guys....you should get some more on here....nice to have some writers FINALLY chiming in on this thread...
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another one i did back when i liked rap but now i hate the stuff
Flaming Tree By the Psychos It’s 2:59 going on 3:00 I’m just chilling with my homies in a tree All of sudden a wicked bolt of lighting strikes Now just plain bites I fall fall fall Like a huge billiard ball I land on a surface of fire and leaves Looking up I see A flaming tree Looking down on me I say Chorus: Burn baby burn I want to see leafs turn black Burn baby burn I think this is giving me a heart attack Burn baby burn Flames are dancing Looking down at me I grab some gasoline because I want more My arms are feeling sore So I let it all pour out Then light a match Watch the magic start it is not very good but i made it when i was 10 4 years ago so what does every one think |
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