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GorePhobia 10-29-2007 07:50 AM

Review My Script
 
Hey guys the script I want you to read and review and tell me what you think is in the Horror Filmmaker's forum but I wanted to post something here because I don't think many people frequent the Filmmaker forum. So I will post the link to it here and if you guys get a chance read it for me and tell me what you think. I am very curious to see what Rod thinks about it since he is an actual screenwriter.

Thanks for your time.

My Missing Persons Script on the Horror Filmmaker Forum.

Disease 10-29-2007 08:08 AM

Will do..............

GorePhobia 10-30-2007 06:49 AM

Anyone else want to read and review my script. I want as much feedback as possible.

the_real_linda 10-30-2007 10:55 AM

im reading it now... always interested in new work, esp by anyone here

GorePhobia 10-30-2007 10:59 AM

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Originally Posted by the_real_linda (Post 643057)
im reading it now... always interested in new work, esp by anyone here

awesome

let me know in that thread what you think and any pointers you might have

Roderick Usher 10-30-2007 11:02 AM

http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

GorePhobia 10-30-2007 11:05 AM

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Originally Posted by Roderick Usher (Post 643064)
http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

You tricked me!!

the_real_linda 10-30-2007 11:06 AM

lol i clicked the link as well....:D

AmericanManiac 10-31-2007 04:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roderick Usher (Post 643064)
http://kevan.org/brain.cgi?Rev.%20Sean.

this link might help you out.

I did as well :rolleyes:
I'll give it a read, I do like the Saw parody you did is it still on your myspace?

GorePhobia 10-31-2007 08:52 AM

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Originally Posted by AmericanManiac (Post 643389)
I did as well :rolleyes:
I'll give it a read, I do like the Saw parody you did is it still on your myspace?

Yes sir it is.

PR3SSUR3 11-01-2007 06:24 PM

Something to do with the person behind that linked site had a movie on the Sci-Fi Channel once, but I can't remember the name of it.

Anyone?

novakru 11-03-2007 05:46 PM

I liked this script.

GorePhobia 11-04-2007 11:00 AM

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Originally Posted by novakru (Post 644345)
I liked this script.

Thanks I really appreciate it.

I am going to do some rewrites on it to fix some of the dialouge and such.

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 12:15 AM

I touched the script up a bit everyone check it out and tell me what you think now.

It is in the forum of Horror Filmmakers.

ferretchucker 11-06-2007 07:03 AM

I wrote a short script a while back. See what you all think, it's on my website.

http://pic5.piczo.com/ferretchucker/?g=46524489&cr=5

Psycom5k 11-06-2007 11:04 AM

I'm no expert, but I have read the first script you posted, and all of the reveiws, and I can't really add anything new. I'll read the revised one later, don't have time now. Good job though.

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 11:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Psycom5k (Post 644960)
I'm no expert, but I have read the first script you posted, and all of the reveiws, and I can't really add anything new. I'll read the revised one later, don't have time now. Good job though.

Thanks man. Yeah it's sometimes hard to write a good script. As soon as I get a camera or start film school I am going to shoot this bad boy.

ferretchucker 11-06-2007 12:09 PM

Cool. I can't wait to see it. I only think it will be hard to get the right sets.

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 644990)
Cool. I can't wait to see it. I only think it will be hard to get the right sets.

I scouted it all out. I have found a bathroom that is disclosed and I can use at 1-2AM that no one will harass us. So it's all good.

ferretchucker 11-06-2007 12:22 PM

What about the highway scene? How will you film that?

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 12:24 PM

on a highway late at night

ferretchucker 11-06-2007 12:25 PM

even the scenes inside the car?

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 12:37 PM

camera mount on the hood or i put the camera on the dash

there are many ways this can be done

Disease 11-06-2007 12:44 PM

The passenger seat is the way to go, the back seat as well....

ferretchucker 11-06-2007 12:50 PM

cool. Put it on youtube or something.

GorePhobia 11-06-2007 02:11 PM

when it's all done I will def. put it on youtube...

ferretchucker 11-07-2007 11:52 AM

looking forward to it. Got anybody in mind to be in it?

GorePhobia 11-07-2007 01:34 PM

Not yet really. I will probably put a casting call out and have some auditions for it.


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