New online story: Gloom
 

Incase anyone is interested, i have posted the prelude to a dark fantasy story on my site here:

http://www.vodstok.net/gloom/

let me know what you think of the openeing. there is a lot planned for this, and the more feedback i get, the faster it will be done, so let me know what you think . :)

Awww, c'mon. Don't make me beg. If you hate it, I'll refund your money ;)

I really liked it. Made me want to read more so I guess it's working so far. It's very very H.G. Wells, which is a good thing!

cool, thanks :). It's a work in progress, I'm hoping to add new chapters every couple of weeks. :)

Cool, post a link here when you update it as I'd love to read more.

Im a dork , i know. Humor me and read it.




Please.:)

Very sci-fi-ish. I like it, can't wait to read the other chapters and to see what the graphics look like. Nice imagery and use of words as well.

I Like It :D not Perfect yet ..but your getting there ...Reminds me a bit of HP LOVECRAFT - Which is a Very Good Thing ;) !!

lovecraft? you flatte rme. He is the only "horror" i ever really read. Thanks :) I actually wenty for his level of description when writing it so you have no idea how good a compliment that is :D

:D I can't wait to read the next Chapter .