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Opening credits role. Fade to the outside of Newbs. Everybody is removing the boards that were over the doors and windows. Ferret: You never actaully said, how did you come back? __V__: Didn't I tell you? Massacreman: No. Remember, Rayne attacked, all that jazz. __V__: Well, I was just about to get onto the plane, when I decided that there was no point in running. I left the airport but couldn't find Massacre. I was trying to hitch a ride back here so I could face the judge, when I saw it. Gore: I think I'll watch Sexcetra ton- Disease: Shut the fuck up, this is getting good. __V__: In some trees, was a suitcase. It was filled with money. I picked it up when I saw some guys coming out of the trees. The money was probably theirs so I ran. I got a ride and came back. Missmacabre: Why did you take so long? __V__: One of the truckers thought I said Vegas. They all laugh. Ferret So how much money was there? __V__: $950,000. After I've payed the family of that workman, We'll have $250,000 to finish this place up. OURSELVES! Missmacabre: Let's get Dante and tell him the good news! They all run off. Ferret slowly wheels behind. Fade to the hospital. Jenna is lying in her bed. Mothman and Tic are beside her. Mothman: Jenna. Can you hear us? Tic: It's Moth and Tic. Jenna: ... Tic stands up. Tic: I'm starving, I'm gonna find a vending machine. Mothman glares at him. Tic: You'll see why I'm doing this soon... He walks out. Mothman: He's just gone to get some... He puts his hand in his face and begins to sob. Mothman: Why? Why did you do thi to yourself? Jenna stirs. Mothman: I thought I could help you. I thought I was helping you. But... He starts crying Mothman: I love you Jenna. I've always loved you. I could never live without you...please...please don't go. She moves around, then rolls over to face him. Her eyes are opens and she's smiling. Jenna: Mean it? Mothman hugs her. Tic walks in. Tic: Thank god it worked. I couldn't bare those awkward silences at the station a minute longer. They all laugh. Fade to the outside of Dante's flat. Everybody is knocking on the door. Ferret: DANTE! __V__: Dante. It's __V__. I'm back. No answer. Everybody stands there. Missmacabre: Something's up... Gore: You guys are pussies. They all glare at him. Gore: Just do this. He steps back, then kicks the door. He falls backwards and the door stays still. Ferret: I could have kicked it better than that and I have no legs! __V__ does the same but it opens. The flat is in a terrible state. Everything it smashed, the walls are stained and the furniture is everywhere. Dante is lying on the floor, motionless. There is a piece of brocken glass in his belly and blood everywhere. Disease: Oh my god...maybe we should move gore. Ferret: Shut up! Missmacabre: I'll go to the police. She runs towards the station. Dante: Rayne... __V__: No...she wont do this again. NOT AGAIN!!! He runs through the flat and bashes the wall with his fist. __V__: She could be anywhere by now! Fade to the hospital. The camera shoots through the hallways, it passes horrorobsessed and goes into a small, one bed room. A small boy is laying there and someone is on the end of his bed. It's freak and Rayne. Rayne: It's all right...everything will be okay. You'll be better soon. Then we'll go and get daddy and be a big happy family... Closing credits role. |
Hmmm fuck the police, we can handle this ourselfs...
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Opening credits role. Fade to Newbs. All the people who were at Dantes are sitting down, drinking. Disease: Why did Raynie turn evil? Ferret: I don't need this right now. Gore: She always seemed so nice to me. Ferret: It was dude. Dudeguadalupe. Disease: The guy who killed Aunt Stubborn? Ferret: Yeh. Didn't your mum tell you guys? She was having an affair with him. They planned her death together. Tic walks in. Tic: Can you all come down to the station? They all get up and leave. Disease whispers something in missmacabres ear and she slaps him. Fade to the station. Everybody sits down. Tic: So...start from the beginning. What actually happened? Disease: Do we get food here? Tic puts his face in his hands. fade to the hospital. Mothman is beside Jennas bed. Mothman: ...and I'm not listening to all your crap CD's! Jenna: If we're moving in together, you'll follow my rules. Anyway, I think it's food time. Do you wanna go and get something from the Café? Mothman: I've already arranged lunch... A nurse walks in, closely followed by several men in suits. the nurse puts down a plate in front of Jenna. It's a great looking roast. The men start singing quietly. Jenna looks at mothman, confused. Mothman: Jenna. I love you. I know you love me too. We're going to move in together. I'll put up with your bad music, you'll ut up with my snoring. But I couldn't live like that...unless. He gets down on one knee and produces a small box. There's a ring inside. Mothman: Jenna. Will you marry me? Jenna: Oh my...Mothman...surely you can't be...YES!!! The nurse cheers, the men start singing the Abba song I do, I do, I do, I do. The camera zooms down the hallway. Young freak is walking along. He's smiling up at people. He goes up to a room with an old man in it. Old man: Hello little boy. He smiles at freak. Freak smiles back. Old man: What happened to you? Freak: I was in a fire... Old man: That's a shame. Are your parents okay? Freak nods. The old man smiles. Old man: I've got a disease called Cancer. It's quite bad. I don't have long... Freak looks at the floor sadly. Old man: That's great. Say, my grandson came in earlier and gave me these. He produces some M&M's. Old man: I don't really like chocolate. Do you wants them? Freak nods and walks towards the old man. He then pulls a scalpel from his back pocket and slices the old mans neck. The old man shakes, then falls over, out of his bed. Blood is everywhere. Freak smiles and walks out the room and back up the hall, the scalpel concealed in his sleave. Fade to the police station. A woman walks into the room where the people are being spoken to. Police Woman: Tic. Murderdoll has been spotted in California! Tic: Wha-? I'm sorry guys, we'll have to end there. Thanks for your help. They all get up and leave. Fade back to the hospital. Freak is standing in a hallway, looking through a door. The camera changes to his point of view. He's looking at Jenna. He smiles. Ending credits role. |
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Hey Gore, we seem like tweedle dee and tweedle dum...
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Tweedle dum and tweedle dummer. Anyway, you two are some of the most fun characters to write. You will each get your own serious stories but for now, it stays as it is.
And sorry Jenna, freak has his eyes on you. But you may come out alive! For me, freak is a kind of Gage/ Damien charcter. He'll have a big story soon. Anyway, to help things move along a bit, I was thinking of doing a time skip. A kind of 1 year later thing, after finishing off all the current storylines. Apart from one. I'll leave one open. It will be a kind of "Season 2" thing. Do you guys think that would work? |
Your plan sounds good Ferretchucker. :)
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I did one a while back showing mine and stubborns wedding when rayne and dude killed her. But if you want, here it goes.
Opening credits role. A subtitle "Scarecrow and __V__" appears. Fade to a small house. It's winter and the lights are on. There is snow outside. The camera goes inside a house. A teenage boy is sitting down, watching tele. __V__: Mum. When's dad getting back? LilMissScareAll: Soon...soon. __V__: I want him too see this bit. LMSA: I don't think he'll be back for this... __V__'s Gran: Just tell him dear. LMSA: Be quiet. __V__: Tell me what? LMSA: Nothing. __V__: Tell me what?! LMSA: Your dad...he wont be coming home...not for a long time. __V__: He's left us?! LMSA: Try not to be too upset. It's for the best. __V__: For the best? FOR THE BEST?! We were struggling with money as it is! Grandad: It's okay. I'll get a job. __V__: That's not fair. You're too old for a job. You deserve a rest. __V__ storms up to his room. Fade to him laying in bed. He's writing an note. Dear mum, Gran, Grandad. I love you all. But now that dad's left, I'm a burden. I'm old enough to work. I'm leaving. I'll get a job and find a flat somewhere. Don't wait up for me. I wont come back. You'd only stop me leaving if I did. It's not fair on you all me being here. __V__ Fade to him putting the note on his pillow and climbing out the window, a small bag on his back. He walks away and looks up at the house, then carries on walking. The screen goes blank, then a scream is heard. LMSA is standing above __V__'s bed, the note in her hand. She starts crying. Flight of Icarus starts playing and there's a short montage of __V__ looking for work, getting a flat, his mum crying and talking to the police, him coming to the house and looking through the window. When it stops, LMSA is standing in a small office. Adoption Worker: Are you sure you're ready to adopt Miss ScareAll. I read the newspaper when __V__ when missing, and it's only been 6 months. LMSA: I just need someone to fill the void. Adoption Worker: We have a young girl. She's 7 years old and- LMSA: I'd like someone like __V__. Adoption Worker: Ah. Then maybe you need to meet scarecrow. Scarecrow! Come in here! Somebody wants to meet you! Fade to __V__, picking up litter in the street. He sees a newspaper. There's a picture of his mum on there and the headline. Distraught Family make attempt to get back to normal __V__: What? Fade to him going towards the house. The door opens and his mum and a boy, who looks similar but slightly younger then him, walk out, laughing. Scarecrow: Hi! We're just about to have a snowball fight! Wanna join in? __V__ looks at his mum. Her jaw drops. She runs towards him and hugs him. LMSA: __V__!!! Scarecrow: You...you're __V__? Fade to the inside ofthe house. Everyone is sitting down, around __V__ __V__: So, I really wanted to come back, but they wouldn't let me. I had to sneak out. Scarecrow: Why did you join a cult? __V__: Free room. Free food. Scarecrow: Well...I don't want you to think I'm trying to replace you. __V__: Not at all. And I'll go if you want me to. Scarecrow: Why would I want you to go? I finally have a big brother. LMSA gets up and hugs them both. Gran starts crying. Fade to nightime, __V__'s walking home with a red haired girl. __V__: So...I was thinking. Since it's our third date...do you want to meet my family? Spal: Sure. They both walk in. Scarecrow gets up. Scarecrow: So, where is she. I feel the need to show baby pictures of - He stands still, mouth open, looking at Spal. Spal: Scarecrow? Oh my...I have to go. She runs out the door. __V__: What was all of that about? Scarecrow: I've told you about her. She abandonned me! __V__: That's your sister?! Scarecrow runs upstairs. Cut to a shot of __V__ and LMSA eating breakfast. __V__: He just wont listen to me. I expected it for a while, but 2 weeks. LMSA: Well...he's been through a lot. Can you blame him? __V__: I guess not. Cut to scarecrow at school. He's walking along when a kid about two years younger than him accidentally nudges him. Scarecrow: WHAT THE FUCK?! Kid: I'm sorry. I didn't see you. Scarecrow: Can you see this?! He punches the kid, who falls backwards into a locker. He lays there, looking up at scarecrow. Some tall, muscular guys come over to scarecrow. Guy: Wow. I guess you arent as wimpy as we thought. Wanna meet us after school? Scarecrow: Okay. Guy: Bus stop near Eastwood street. Scarecrow: See you there. Fade to scarecrow sitting at a bus stop. The screen fastforwards to night time, nobody turns up. He gets up and walks down the street to a shop. He looks around, the puts a bottle of coke in his jacket, and walks out. Fade to scarecrow, walking down the street, drinking the coke. He sees the guys. Scarecrow: Hi... Guy: Ha! You fell for it. Sorry man, we were just messing with ya. See him. Go and beat him up. He points to a guy walking along, reading a newspaper. Guy: Then you can hang out with us. He looks around, then goes up to the guy. He picks up a stick and whacks him round the head with it. He then starts laying into the guy, when __V__ walks around the corner. __V__: Scarecrow? SCARECROW!!! He runs up to him and pushes him off the guy, who runs away. __V__: What the fuck happened to you?! You were fine a few weeks ago! Scarecrow: FUCK YOU!!! He runs off. Fade to the inside of the house. __V__ is talking to LMSA. LMSA: Why would he do that? __V__: I don't know. Why wont you believe me? LMSA: He wouldn't. __V__ walks out of the house and starts hitting a wall. A short montage of Scarecrow and his friends commiting crimes is shown. Cut to a shot of Scarecrow and the guys outside a house, all dressed in white. Guy: Go on. You came up with the idea. Do it. Show that black son of a bitch what we think of him. Scarecrow drinks from a bottle, then soaks a cloth in the drink, sticks it in the bottle then light it. He throws it through an open window. Instantly, a fire breaks out. Some screams are heard. Cut to __V__ walking along a path. He hears the noises and starts running to see what's happened. Scarecrow runs past him. __V__ stops him and looks at him, shocked. Scarecrow spits in __V__'s face and runs off, laughing. __V__ runs to a phone box and dials. __V__: Fire! The camera fades to a shot of __V__'s house. There are police cars outside. Vod: So. Your son has disseapeared. Your other son saw him at the scene. I think that's enough. LMSA: NO! NO! PLEASE! HE WOULDN'T DO THAT! PLEASE!!! The police walk out. So does __V__. He sits down and starts to cry. The screen goes black, and the number 1994 appears on the screen. An adult __V__ is talking to his mum. LMSA: He's being transferred. To a place called readers row. Dr. Zero will be helping him. __V__: Zero? Zero. Where do I know that name? The screen cuts to the clip of __V__ picking up litter. The screen rewinds, then plays again, from further back. __V__ looks up at a street sign. It says Readers Row. A little boy comes up to __V__. Boy: Hi. My names Zero. __V__: Zero? That's an unusual name. Zero: We checked. I'm the only one in the state. __V__: Hi then Zero. I'm __V__. Zero: Wanna play ball? __V__: I wish I could. But I have work to do. Zero: I don't really like playing anyway. I wanna be a psychologist when I'm older. I can help people. The screen fades back to __V__ and LMSA. LMSA: I know you don't like him. But I love him. Can you do something for me? __V__: What? LMSA: Move to Readers Row. Keep an eye on Scarecrow. __V__ looks away, then back. He nods, slowly. __V__: Only for you. Not him. The screen goes blank. The number 2007 comes up. The screen fades to some woods. There's a small bird watching treehouse where somedoy is sitting. The screen shows that they're holding a picture of __V__ and scarecrow smiling. The hands holding it shake, then tear the picture. Closing credits role. |
An entire episode dedicated to me and scarecrow...:cool:
...reminds me of that interjection of Tuco and Father Ramirez in The Good, The Bad and The Ugly. Touching. Touchę, FC.;) |
glad you liked it.
More comments. MORE! MORE!!! |
And what about the others' lives? Are we not human, do we not have emotions, do we not bleed?
e.g in my first episode why does Mothman say "So the famous tic ......" edit: went through every thread just to make sure the line was right. |
that reminds me, I did have a plan for that. I might bring it in.
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Opening credits role. Fade to the inside of XtRaVa's house. He and Horrorobsessed are eating breakfast. XtRaVa: H. I'm gonna be gone for a while. Bloody buisness bleeds me dry. Horrorobsessed: They owe you big time. You work at least 5 hours overtime a week. XtRaVa: Yeh. This time I'm going to California to pitch a new building. Horrorobsessed: You should see if they let you build something around here. XtRaVa: Could do. Anyway, I'm leaving in an hour. Horrorobsessed: WHAT?! XtRaVa: I'm leaving in an hour. I've got my suitcase packed. I'll bring you back something nice. I'll be back in a week. He kisses her on the cheek then goes upstairs. She sits there, open mouthed for a while. The screen fades to __V__ reading the news paper. The headline "It's not Rayneing Them" is visible. __V__: Look at this. Disease gets up from the sofa. Disease: I still cant believe Ferret kicked me out. __V__: You put hot sauce in his tea. Disease: So? __V__: Your mum may have moved to australia to have you and gore, but he was born in England. Do you know how much tea means to him? Disease: What'd you wanna show me? __V__: The newspaper got it wrong again. They said Rayne and her brother scarecrow have still evaded capture. Disease: Scarecrow isn't her brother. Does he even have a sister? __V__: He did...and a brother. Disease: How could they make a mistake like that? __V__: I dunno. But there's something strange about this... Disease: What do you mean? __V__: Once, a few years ago, Scarecrow lead somebody into a trap by making the newspaper make a mistake. Not many people know but I did some research. Disease: Who do you think he's trying to trap? __V__: I have no idea. But I bet they're not stupid enough to fall for it. Fade to the flat above the shop. Hammerfan is serving a customer. Hammerfan: I don't recognise you. Crabapple: I haven't been here for a while. Bad memories. But now I'm back to help a friend. The door to the flat upstairs opens and zero walks out naked. Zero: I am so tired...I don't know what I'm doing. Crab: Jesus christ. Zero, cover yourself up. Zero grabs a tiny pack of big reds and puts it over his "area". Crab: It may be small but...oh nevermind. Good to meet you hammer. Seeya when you realise what you just did Zero. Bye. He walks out. Fade to ferretchucker's house. He and __V__ are talking. __V__: She has a grudge against us both, but I think she'd go after you. When you only have two limbs, you're an easy target. The doorbell rings. __V__ answers it. He slowly walks into the living room, followed by Crab. Ferret: What? What the hell are you doing here? Crab: News got to me about Rayne. Ferret: What do you care? Crab: Newb saved my life from a hitman she sent. She tried to kill me twice. I was nearly married to her. Ferret: But you're not sleeping here. My nephew, Gorephobia, has the only extra room. Crab: WHAT?! __V__: Different Gorephobia Crab. This one's too young. Crab: What was his dad called? Ferret: His dad. He ran when my sister got pregnant. But his name was also gorephobia. Crab: WHAT!? See post 193 for details. I bet you lot forgot about that. Fade to a shot of the hospital. Freak picks is smiling. He's in the hallway. He's looking at Jenna. She looks at him and waves. He smiles and waves back. Fade back to Ferretchucker's house. Disease and Gore are now there. Gore: What's this about? Ferret: I...I don't know how to say this. It's about your dad. He...he had some other children. disease: What? Who? Crab: My half brother for one. And my cousin. Who happens to be my half brothers half brother. Gore: Slow down. Crab: GorePhobia Sr. had a son called Newb. Disease: I knew who Newb was. He was at Ferrets wedding. Crab: Well. He had Newb with my mum. Then he left. Then he came back. Needless to say my mum hated him, but her slut sister got pregnant. He left again. Gore: Who's this other guy. Your cousin. Ferret: Dude. Disease: Dudeguadalupe? Crab: Then...he had you. Newb was your half brother. And so is Dude. Gore: I don't believe this. Ferret: It's true. But there's something else. Crab: I've managed to find out who Gorephobia is. I tracked him down. He'd changed his name. The screen fades out to show an old man reading a newspaper in an armchair. He puts it down and sees a smiling Rayne at his window. Ending credits role. Okay, I'll admit it. This was never the plan. I went back to just remember what Crab had told __V__, then I saw the name Gore. I decided, instead of putting it down to coincidence, to link the stories. Good revalation though. Who do you lot want the dad to be? Person with the highest votes is the dad. Can't be an existing character. |
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Livin it HDC is going on "hiatus" for a while. I will carry it on, I'm just not sure when.
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Are you putting it on hold becasue your going to be real busy or because nobody's is leaving comments?
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a bit of both
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It's Back!!!
Opening credits role, it's been re-done with a new theme tune. Cut to a shot of Newbs. It's open and flooding with people.
__V__ is serving some people. __V__: I haven't seen you two around here for ages. Alkytrio: We went backpacking after Crabs wedding disaster. Americanmaniac: Yeh, Africa is really pretty cool. __V__: Where's Cheebs? Alkytrio: He'll be here soon, he's just gone to visit his mum. Posher wheels ferret up to the bar. Alkytrio: JESUS CHRIST!!! Americanmaniac: What the hell happened to you?! Ferret: Rayne. Alkytrio: We heard she was the maniac. Americanmaniac: I'm the maniac. Ferret: She's still at large, but not around here. Although, she still does damage... Cut to a shot of Gore on his sofa, he's got a blanket over him. Disease: It was two months ago. Get over it. Gore: Get over it? Dad died. He was killed. Disease: He was never our fucking Dad, and if you call him that again, I will hit you. Disease walks out. Cut to the police station. Mothman is sitting opposite Dude. Mothman: We can make things better for you. Just tell us, where is she? Dude: With your mum. Tic: Help us out here. she hasn't come to help you. She's forgotten about you. Dude starts humming Smoke on the Water. Tic: Take him back to his cell. Mothman and some others guide him back. VampiricClown pipes up. VC: I have some useful information! Dude looks at VC, worried. VampiricClown: You see, a long time ago, Dude and Rayne did the dir- Dude: Fuck you clown cunt! VampiricClown: That wasn't very nice! Mothman: Tell us what you know, now. Dude: Tell them and you die. Mothman: Shut up Dude! VampiricClown: I have one word. Freak. Dude goes mad, and breaks free of the guards and begins smashing the bars of the cell wildly. One of the guards draws his guns. Mothman: STOP! The guard shakes and brings his gun down. Mothman draws another gun and shoots it at Dude's back. It's a tranquilizer. Dude carries on smashing the cells. Three more darts are fired. He slumps to the floor. Mothman: Freak? Cut to a small house. It's full of people, partying. the camera goes up into the attic. Two people are in there. Freak: Mummy. When's Daddy coming back? Rayne: Soon. But remember what I said. You can't keep on what you're doing. Freak: Killing? Rayne: Yes. freak: But you and Daddy do it. Rayne: And look where it's got us. You can't. I love you and will stay with you as long as I can, but I'm scared... Freak: Of what? Rayne: What will happen if you don't stop. I love you and would do anything to protect you, but that doesn't mean it's right. Not right for you. You deserve a good life. Now remember what I told you to do? Freak nods. He goes into a corner, into his sleepin back and piles some boxes infront of him. Cut to another new place. It's a shed. Scarecrow and Someone else are in there. Scarecrow: Tonight, we rest. Murderdoll: Tommorow, we get revenge. They look out through the shed door to the house across the street. Sounds of partying can be heard coming from there. Closing credits role. |
yay! i am in this!!
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you've been in it for a while Mahoney.
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i know but i like seeing myself come up everytime you do one
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cool. I like writing them and was sad when I stopped but they're back. Next episode is on tuesday.
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Opening credits role. Fade into a shot of someone's closed eyes. everything is slightly quiet, but some faint sounds of struggling can be heard. The eye opens, suddenly everything becomes loud. Rayne: Freak! RUN! RUN!!! The camera moves to show Rayne struggling with Scarecrow and Murderdoll. They're getting close to Freak, but she keeps on jumping at their legs and stopping them. Freak: MUM! Rayne: JUST GO! I CAN HANDLE THIS!!! Freak looks around. He looks at the hatch, but it's too near to scarecrow. He picks up a hammer and starts at the roof with the sharper end. He makes a small hole, then uses his hands to make it bigger. He begins climbing out then turns around. Freak: Mum. Rayne: I love you Freak! Don't ever forget that! NOW RUN!!! He climbs out. Scarecrow punches Rayne and follows. Freak is working his way down the guttering. Scarecrow looks over the side of the house and smiles. He holds the hammer out over Freaks head, wiggling it around. Scarecrow: Three...two - A hand grabs him. There's a struggle. Rayne and Scarecrow are having a fist fight, Freak is hanging off the guttering, paralysed at the sight. Rayne kicks scarecrows leg. He loses his footing and falls, but grabs raynes leg. She manages to hold onto the edge of the hole. Scarecrow: Hmmmm. I'm holding onto you, you're holding onto the ledge. You get up, I get up. Sounds fair. I let the boy get away and we sort it out between us. Rayne: You know what. You can shove a cork up your arse. Scarecrow: What? everything goes into slow-motion. Whitney Huston I will always love you begins playing. Freak screams. Rayne looks at him and smiles. Her hand lets go of the edge and her and scarecrow fall. Rayne lands on Scarecrow, softening the impact. Everything goes back to full speed and she begins crawling away. Scarecrow picks up the hammer off the floor and hits her in the head with it. She slumps, then so does he. Freak gets down the rest of the guttering and begins crying beside Rayne. Murderdoll: Wanna play cops and robbers? I'm the cops. Freak screams. Suddenly, lots of police cars arrive. Murderdoll looks around.The front door of the house opens and a guy is standing there with a phone in one hand and a knife in the other. Guy: Actually, they are bitch. All the police get out of their cars. Murderdoll looks around angrily and screams. She looks at the floor. Freak's gone. Mothman appears from one of the cars. Mothman: Finally. He smiles. Fade to Newb's. Jenna is sitting at the bar. Massacreman: I still can't believe you're engaged. Jenna: It's wonderful. We've got all the plans. Alkytrio: You leave town for a few months and you miss everything! The door opens. Cheebs walks in. __V__: Look what the cat dragged in. Another old face! Phalanx: Hi you lot. Anything happen whilst I was gone? Americanmaniac: You have no idea! __V__: That reminds me. Someone else died...Kemal. Alky: The policeman? Americanmaniac: Who's replaced him? __V__: Someone called Tic. He's pretty go- Phalanx runs out. Fade to a shot of Gore sitting on a bench. Ferret wheels over. Ferret: Gore. I know you and Disease fell out. He told me. Gore: He doesn't give a shit about Dad. Ferret: And why do you? Gore: Because he's my dad! Do I need any other reason? Ferret: YES! I'm a dad myself. But I'm a bad one simply because I'm not there. I doubt she even knows I exist. Gore: Pinkfloyd never told? Ferret: I phoned up last month. She said that "our daughter" doesn't need me in her life. I walked out when she was three days old. We hadn't even named her. I doubt I'll ever find out her name. Pink wouldn't tell me. Gore: What's your point? Ferret: She was right. I left her. I walked out and haven't done shit. I didn't feed her. I didn't clothe her. I didn't wake up when she was crying. I didn't judge her first boyfriend. And now she's 19. All I did was look after her mother when she was pregnant, and I did a shit job of that. But your dad didn't do that either. When your mum got pregnant, he was gone. Gore: But he's still me dad. You've got two half brothers. One's in prison, one's dead. You didn't even know you had them. There's only one person you can really speak to about this. And that's Crab. Fade to a shot of the police station. Cheebs is running up some steps. He rushes in and sees Tic speaking to a receptionist. Phalanx: TIC! Tic: Phalanx? Phalanx: I don't...I don't belive this. Tic: Neither do I... Phalanx: This is...this is great! Tic: I told you to forget about it all. Phalanx: You jumped in front of a bullet for me! Tic: So? Phalanx: You are the best person for the job! I...I can't believe it. I told mothman about you. Has he mentioned it? Tic: Briefly. When we first met he said I as "the famous Tic." suddenly the station is alive with activity. Lots of people are in there. Police, murderdoll and some other guys including the one who phones the police. Murderdoll is taken up to the cells. When the cell dor closes, Dude starts speaking. Dude: Good to have you back. MD: Fuck off. And there'll be more. Your slag got me arrested. Dude: Fuck you. Where is she? MD: HEr and Scarecrow were taken to hospital. They might be there a while. Dude: I can wait. Me and her need to have a little chat... Ending credits role. |
Glad to see you finally brought it back.Nice job.
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Thanks, Like I've said before I love doing them but it's pretty difficult work.
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Damn, I missed alot. Great job as always.
What's a slag? |
It's a lugey
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Oh that clears it up
Says the stupid american |
I am a hero yah!
Oh oh ...... who's betting I die next :( |
I'll take that bet, maybe I'll even get to make it happen.
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Admit it, it would be cool.
Admit it......go on......do it. |
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