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Opening credits role. Flash to the inside of XtRaVa's house. Mothman and Tic run out the back door. They climb over the back garden fence to the back alley. It's empty. They split up. Fade to a small, run down barn. It's got a television, a sofa and a bed in it. Rayne carries Freak into it. She lays him on the bed. Rayne: Hello Freak...do you remember me? He reaches into his pocket and produces a picture of her, looking slightly younger. Rayne: Yes. That's me. Freak: Mum...my? Rayne wipes a tear from her eyes. Rayne: Are you sleepy? He nods. Rayne: Then, I'll start a fire to keep us warm. You go to beddy byes. Freak: Tell me a story... Rayne: Okay then...Once upon a time, in a land, far, far away. There was a princess in love. But her wicked mother and step-father wouldn't allow it. They thought her love was a bad man. So she kept it a secret. A clip of Dude sitting in his jail cell is faded in with Rayne and Freak. Rayne: The princess' mum was ill. She was going to die and suffer. So, the princess, who still loved her mother, decided to stop her suffering. She was going to put her in a deep sleep. A clip of Stubborn lays onto the images, she's lying in her coffin. Rayne: The princess' love tried to help her, but then an evil warlock discovered the plan and decided to ruin it. He got the princess' love in a dark tower and threw away the key. But the woman had a baby. The most handsome, wonderful baby in the world. It was her loves baby. A clip of freak in the orphanage lays on the screen. Rayne: The princess couldn't let anyone know about her baby or the warlock would get rid of her. She sent him away to a place where he would be looked after. Years later. She returned. And she got her baby back. And they lived happily ever after. She looks down at Freak. He's asleep. Fade to a small road. Tic is running along it. It's deserted and the sky is getting dark. He looks around. Nothing. Tic: Scarecrow? A can of drink rolls along the road. Tic draws his gun. Tic: Hello? Somebody taps Tic's shoulder. He spins around but is faced only with Jenna and Vod, who are making "SHHH" motions. They point to a house. The three people walk towards it. Fade to a close-up shot of Rayne. Screaming can be heard in the background. SHe looks up. The camera zooms out to reveal the barn in flames. Rayne: NOOOOOOO!!!! She jumps up and covers her face with a cushion from the sofa she was sleeping on. She walks towards Freak. A piece of the roof falls down. It lands on the bed, beside freak. The whole bed goes up in flames. Rayne: FRRREEEAAAKKK!!!!! She runs to the bed, forgetting about the fire. She shoves her hands into the blaze and pulls out freak, who's on fire. She runs out of the barn and down to a small stream. She puts freak into the water. The fire goes out but he has horrific burns. Rayne sloches down and breaks into tears. Fade to the inside of the house. The trio are searching around. Jenna: Anything? Tic: No. I don't think he's here. Jenna: Dad? No response. She says it a bit louder. Jenna: Dad? Still no response. She rushes to the bottom of the stairs. Jenna: Dad! He appears at the top. Vod: I don't see him. He might not be here. We should try next door. I have a feeling he would have done something by now. HE has us here. If he wanted to do something, he would have. Behind him, the loft hatch opens (There arent any stairs to it.) Scarecrow hangs down. He shoves a sharp rod of metal through Vods stomach. Vod looks shocked and falls down the stairs. Jenna scream. Scarecrow goes back up into the loft. Tic shoots at the ceiling. No sucess. Fade to a shot of a hospital. Rayne is holding a bundle. She hurries in, leaves it at the reception whilst the receptionists back is turned and leaves. There's a note. IT is read out in Raynes voice. This boy was in a fire. I rescued him. He needs urgent treatment. Please look after him carefully. Please. R Closing credits role Well, that was a ver actiony one. Rayne's story was one sided but oh well. Tune in on tuesday for the next episode! |
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you never know, I can make things happen...
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Good work ferret.Really enjoying this so far.
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thanks. Hehe, you're the baby.
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Well, that was sad.....:( Good job, Ferret. I am also enjoying this. Can't wait for the next episode.
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was i used in an episode yet?
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no fore, you weren't used yet. I have a plan.
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Livin' it HDC
Opening credits role. The grid with the fugitives faces has only three left. Murderdoll, Rayne and scarecrow. Cut to a shot of the train station. Ferret and Massacreman are sitting in the small subway there. Ferret: Italian BMT for president! Massacreman: When was the last time you had one of these? Ferret: Three years ago when I visited mum and Dad in England. I vowed not to have one again. I'm gonna have to kill myself now. Massacreman: Do you have any life? Ferret: On Habbo Massacreman: You sad old man. Ferret: You rebelious young whipperschnapper! A train pulls up. Massacreman: That's it. The 147. Ferret: Thanks for this by the way. Driving get's hard without legs. Massacreman: Don't mention it. Ferret: But there's one more thing. One...thing I forgot to mention. Massacreman: They're serial killers! Ferret: No. That would be better. Don't look into they're eyes. They have...the devils eyes. Massacreman: Shut it Loomis. Ferret: But seriously. They're a handful. Massacreman: They're 23. Ferret: I know. Ever heard the name stiffler? Massacreman: Shit... The two walk outside the subway. They look around and ferret points. Two men see them and run over. They each have a bag with them. Man 1: Hey. How the fuck you been ferret you old man whore. Ferret: Uncle ferret to you two. And if you live with me, I demand some respect. Man 2: I never knew you had no legs. Man 1: Raynie did it. Massacreman: Shall we get going then? Man 1: Fuck you. This is family time. Ferret: Disease! This is massacreman. He's our driver. Disease: Hear that gore. Ferret finally made the big time. Ferret: The legless can't drive numbnuts. Disease: Why weren't you at the funeral. Ferret: Hmmmm. I wonder. Maybe because you were in canada, and I was here! Disease: Only mum would die on holiday. Ferret: Lets go. Gore: Any hot babes around here? Massacreman: It's gonna be a long drive. Fade to the police station. Mothman is at his desk, head in his hands. Jenna is by his side. Silent. A woman comes in. Woman: Need a drink? Mothman: No thanks Veer. How about you jenna? She says nothing. Mothman: Nevermind. Veer leaves. Mothman looks at jenna. Mothman: There was nothing we could do. Jenna: .... Mothman: When's the funeral? Jenna: ... Mothman: It's been three days now. You have to let your feelings out. She gets up and leaves. Fade to the inside of Newbs. Missmacabre, Dante, Ferret, Massacre and the twins are sitting down, drinking. Gore: Nice place you got here. Disease: You can almost smell the dank. Missmacabre: If only you two knew how much this place has been through... Gore leans over to disease. Gore: She wants me bad. XtRaVa: How long are you two here then. Ferret: At least a month. Gore: Bathroom? They all point upstairs. He walks up there and chooses a door. It's the bedroom. Somebody is sitting on the bed. It's Rayne. She's crying over a picture of Freak. Gore: hey...I'm Gore. Nice room huh? He winks at her. She winks back with an evil smile. Ending credits role. |
comments please fans!
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So am I you're brother or nephew or what am I in this?
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I think you and Ferret are brothers, poor you!
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you're meant to be my nephew. My sisters Son. You and Gore are twins.
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There's always a replacement police officer if you bite the bullet.
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but ...... :eek:
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All's fair in soaps and war.
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Oh ....... alright then, I admit defeat. :(
*God, you're quick!* |
Life is sweet. Anyway, more comments!
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He wants out!
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there will be no fund for your family.
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Well, I have to admit, I forgot I had to do a segment yesterday, so Here comes the next one. There will be one tommorow.
Opening credits role. Cut to the downstairs of Newbs. A thud is heard. Ferret: Great. What's he gone and done now. I knew I shouldn't have let him come. Missmacabre: Should we try to help him? Ferret: Nah. He'll Be okay on his own. Cut to the upstairs. Rayne is holding a pair of scissors over Gore. They're struggling. Gore: What the fuck are you doing?! HELP! HELP!!! Some noises are heard coming up the stairs. Everyone except ferret and massacreman are up the stairs. The thudding of the wheelchair being pushed up the stairs can be heard. Rayne stops what she was doing and stands there. Gore runs away from her. She makes a "Shhhhh" motion. They all stay quiet. Ferret: What's happened then? He reaches the bedroom and pushes past missmacabre. Everyone is still and silent. Ferret's face turns to horror. Rayne: Hello Daddy. She smiles maliciously. Fade to Jennas flat. She's on her sofa. Some alchohol bottles are strewn across the floor. She's crying whilst looking at a picture of Vod. She lifts a pot of pills to her mouth. There's a knock on the door. Mothman: Jenna? Jen? I know you're in there. Look, we need to talk. Tears run down her face. Mothman: You haven't said a word since...it happened. Come on. Would Vod have wanted you to be like this? She puts the pills in her mouth. The banging continues. Fade to the inside of the shop. Hammerfan is counting zero's change out. Hammer: 1...2...3...4...5...6. Zero: Thanks. Hammer: Wait up a second. I'm new here. That bar across the street. Zero: Yu-...I mean, Newbs? Hammer: When's it gonna open. Zero: Erm...Not for a while. Hammer: Is there any decent booze there? Zero: Are you asking me out on a date? Hammer: NO! Zero: Shame... Hammer: What? Zero: What? Hammer: You're a strange one Zero. I'll have to keep my eye on you. He begins to walk out and mumbles. Zero: I'll keep mine on you... Hammer: What? Zero: What? She sighs and he walks away smiling. Cut to Newbs. All the people are downstairs. They're sitting there, nervously. Gore: That's Raynie...I didn't even recognize her. Ferret: Trust you to make a move on your step-cousin. Disease: She is pretty Bangable. Ferret: God help me... Rayne: Shut the fuck up! They're all quiet. She walks around them, holding her knife. Rayne: Which one of you should I kill first? Disease: Gore. Gore: Disease. Rayne: I missed you two. They smile proudly. Ferret gives them an angry glare. Rayne: The annoying Dad who locked up my man? Ferret moves in his wheelchair nervously. Rayne: The tart who liked my ex hubby. Missmacabre Looks around. Rayne: The cousin who tried to make a move on me. Gore smiles apologetically. Rayne: The cousin who once DID make a move on me. Everyone looks at disease. He looks at the floor. Rayne: Or you. The guy who just happened to be here. The door opens. Voice: Or how about me? Everybody turns to look at the door. The light of the sun is creating a silhouette around the person. massacreman: Right on time... Rayne: Shit... __V__: Miss me? Rayne glares, __V__ smiles. Closing credits role. |
Am I busy sunbathing or something?
I think it's about time I killed someone. *apart from myself, which is looking more and more likely* |
Opening credits role. Show the last scene from yesterdays episode. Carry on the scene. Rayne: Look who decided to show up then. __V__: Hi Rayne, still a parent killing slut? Rayne: I hope you remember those words when I'm feeding your intestines to the dogs. __V__: Really? Hmmmm. I always thought that they prefered liver. Mine did, but then, they were all albino. Rayne: Shall we get to buisness? I'll shoot you in the leg, we struggle for a little bit, then I come out victorious. Let's go. __V__: You forgot one thing. I have an Xbox 360 and have 30, 000 hours on Halo 2. Rayne: So what? You're a geek? __V__: No. She points the gun at him and goes to shoot. He shoots first. He shoots the gun from her hand. __V__: Quick trigger finger. She looks from her hand, then to __V__. Her mouth is wide open. She goes to run away. He runs towards her, grabs her around the waist and picks her up. __V__: Ever seen the film Misery? Rayne: I don't waste my time infront of the screen. __V__: Well, you'll pick up the storyline. Ferret gets up. He walks over to the struggling Rayne. Rayne: What do you want? Go and fuck my mum, like you spent most of your time doing. He glares at her, then spits in her face. Silence, then... Rayne: I'LL KILL YOU ALL! I'LL FUCKING BREAK YOUR SPINES! I'LL RIP YOUR TEETH OUT ONE BY ONE! The noise fades as __V__ carrie her upstairs. There's a thud, then __V__ walks back down. __V__: That was fun. He smiles at the rest of the group. They all start laughing in a kind of happy/ scared way. Fade to the outside of Jennas flat. mothman and Tic are standing there. Mothman: She wont answer. I've tried everything. Tic: You don't think she's just asleep then? Mothman: Get real. This is serious. She's got a good lock too. I tried kicking the door down. tic: Wait there. e runs down the stairs and out the door. Mothman stands there in silence for a while, then he hears a muffled smash. The door opens. Tic is standing there. A window is broken behind him. tic: Phone an ambulance. NOW! Mothman gets out his cell phone and phones them. The camera moves around to show Jenna laying on the sofa, blood pouring from her nose, pills everywhere. Fade to Newbs. Disease: Remember me? __V__: How the hell could I forget? You felt up every woman at that bar. Massacreman: When was this? Gore: "97. we came over for a visit. Where were you? Massacreman: Studying in Nepal. Never again. Disease: Any babes? Massacreman: NEPAL!!! They all laugh. A noise is heard from upstairs. __V__ runs up there. He runs back down. __V__: She's gone. Ferret: WHAT? HOW? __V__: She smashed the fucking roof of the closet! Missmacabre: Phone the police! __V__: GIVE ME THE PHONE! Ferret: Isn't she still in the roof then? __V__: No. She smashed into the attic, then out the top. Disease: That's hot. Ferret: GO HOME! NOW! Gore: Do i have to? Ferret: JUST GO! Gore: We haven't got a key. Ferret: FUCK OFF NOW! __V__ puts the phone down. __V__: Where could she be? Think! Fade to the inside of Dante's flat. The doorbell rings. He answers it. Rayne is standing there. Rayne: Hey Pookie? Miss me? Closing credits role. |
So did I die or just get badly burnt?
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badly burnt. You will be returning.
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Sweet.Good job with this man.There has been some tense moments.And some things I didn't expect.
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I want everybody who reads this to post now. Just so I know who my viewers are.
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I don't have anything to say. I'll reply with a smile. :)
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... ... SUDDENLY a bolt of white light hits the screen in a huge FLASH! ...cutting out to a scene behind a man weeping on his knees in a cellar somewhere...and one swift streak of steel later, the body stays still for a second, without a head on it, before collapsing down on one side... Unseen fingers clutch the head...and scratch a huge 5 on its forehead...before pulling the eyes out of it...shrieking with wild laughter... ***HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!*** ...and then THROW it at the screen with a SPLAT!... ...which slowly turns black again... ... ... |
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you still sure you want to die dante?
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Sorry folks, I've just been on two scuba dives at brighton and I'm completely shattered. I wont be writing another episode today, but there will be one tommorow instead.
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I'm a viewer :)
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