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bloody_ribcut 04-19-2008 10:38 AM

neighborhood


the crack flows like coke
poured into the noses
hope is a lost soap

ChronoGrl 04-19-2008 08:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Posher778 (Post 686074)
The Closet

Late night, hang my cloak
Stillness instantly broken
Was that breath I felt?



The End

Shot rings through the night
Blood splatters on the carpet
T'was too much to bear


Would love to hear what people thought. I don't write much.

I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

...

boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

Posher778 04-19-2008 08:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 686265)
I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

...

boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

4
7
5

:P

But thanks anyway

Zero 04-20-2008 06:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 686265)
I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

...

In boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

a minor edit to fix an otherwise lovely expression of emotion!

nice work CG

ferretchucker 04-20-2008 07:55 AM

Flying through the air,
It knows nothing different,
yes, my chucked ferret.

ChronoGrl 04-20-2008 08:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Posher778 (Post 686287)
4
7
5

:P

But thanks anyway

HA

right "boiling" does NOT have 3 syllables...

ferretchucker 04-20-2008 08:03 AM

depends how you say it. some say

boy-ling

som say

boy-all-ing

bloody_ribcut 04-20-2008 08:32 AM

i think boil is two and ing makes it three.

ChronoGrl 04-20-2008 06:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bloody_ribcut (Post 686407)
i think boil is two and ing makes it three.

See? That's what I thought.

But, according to dictionary.com we're wrong (and, yes, I had to look it up):

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...rl/boiling.gif

...

Ode to being sick

hot feverish chills
body wracked with hacking cough
forcing out the phlegm

blaaaaaaaaaaargh

Posher778 04-21-2008 03:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl (Post 686642)
Ode to being sick

hot fev'rish chills
body wracked with hacking cough
forcing out the phlegm

blaaaaaaaaaaargh

4
7
5

again! Get it together!


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