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I was summoned by Horror. :eek:
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next part of the story will hopefully be up within an hour.
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Opening credits role. Fade to the outside of the police station. Mothman and Tic are walking in. Mothman: Well, I think that's everything. I think it's about time I check on the residents. It keeps them in line to see higher up people from the station, No offence Jane, nearby. They both walk up the stairs. They open the door and both step back in disgust. The camera remains on them and nothing can be seen but the blood stained walls and it is assumed they're looking at a body. Mothman runs in looking into each cell. Tic: Crap! First day and this happens. Mothman: Get every spare policeman in here, I'll call in backup. We have a mass breakout. Somebody's helped them. Just that second, somebody comes in over Mothmans radio. Voice: Sir. Sir. Mothman: Yes? Voice: We've been tracking down Scarecrow for days now and the trail has led back to the station. Mothman: Get in the here, there's been a mass breakout. Bloodrayne, VampiricClown, Murderdoll, Phantomstranger, Disease and the rest. Voice: Shit! We're coming. Mothman: Get an ambulance too, officer Angra is badly injured. Voice: Roger that sir. Fade into Yukis and __V__ is making a cocktail in a style similar to that of Tom Cruise. Ferretchucker: Why Are we always in here again? Posher: He hasn't got a job, you have 15 people doing it for you and I haven't got a girlfriend! Dante: I love life, why does it have to end? __V__: Hasn't he drunk his lemonade yet? Posher: Well, we've all had a few gallons of water at least but I don't think he's been that drunk since Linda and hellfire got married. ferretchucker; Maybe it's the shock of what happened with Zero. __V__: Pretty suprising. I've never seen him that way. I had to chuck him out though...didn't I? XtRaVa: We can here you. Can you be quiet? She's trying to get over the shock. __V__: Hold up everybody! I have an important announcement! At the expense of myself, I have been taking 50% of each drink money and putting it in Newbs jar. We now have $3000! 2 more grand and we can start giving it to them! Remember, keep it quiet, they don't know. Just then, Several people rush in through the door. It's Bloodrayne, VC and the rest. Murderdoll Begins hitting people. Bloodrayne Jumps over the bar and with the help of Disease begins attacking __V__. Scarecrow draws a knife and starts swiping for people. Phantomstranger smashes a bottle and stabs somebody. There is mass chaos, then as fast as it started, it's over. They all leave. Some people follow them, making shouting, some gunshots are heard. Ferretchucker: Shit no! Shit. She's back...__V__? __V__!!!! Posher jumps over the bar. Posher: He's bleeding pretty badly. Still breathing. Oh...wait a minute... __V__: The money... Posher: What? Dante: Look at the jar! __V__: Is it there? Ferret: Oh..Oh no. They took it. They took it all... The screen rewinds until they all leave again, this time, the camera changes to an outside shot. Somebody shouts. Person: Police! Police get out here! The prisoners are all here! They've got out! Instantly, lots of police run out of the station, including mothman and Jenna. The fugitives scatter. Mothman chases VC, Jenna chases Bloodrayne. The camera splits into two. One half following each of them. On one side, Mothman chases VC into a house where he picks up a mug and throws it at him. VC dodges it and looks around, smiling. as he does so, he runs straight into a door and falls over. On the other half, Jenna chases Bloodrayne into the small woodland area. She fires her gun a couple of times. Bloodrayne carries on running. They come out the other side and BR runs into a house. Jenna slowly walks in, holding her gun high, looking around. From behind the door, Bloodrayne quickly appears and shoves a knife into Jennas leg. Bloodrayne: This is just too easy... Ending credits role, alongside them is a picture of all of the fugitives. A red cross appears on VC's face. |
Hey, when am I gonna get in on this? I don't mind if its just for one episode, as long as I die an extremely gruesome death that is..... hehe
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Cool! I get to stab somebody! (that sounds wrong, dosen't it?)
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Can I stab somebody With my penis.?
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Here's my shrinks number. Give him a call. 12345 678 901
Hold your horses you lot! There's going to be a lot of killing yet. There's been a breakout and only one of the 6 main fugitives have been caught, there's also the ones I didn't mention. There's going to be a lot of violence in the next few episodes. |
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Dont tell me I m gonna die too, like newb!!:eek: Boy you sure know how to hit up the ratings for an episode, FC.:D |
Can you have a monkey hug someone until they pop or something? Yeah!
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All will be revealed tommorow. Anyway, you should be upset about kemal!
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Opening credits role. The picture with the fugitives appears, one of the faces of someone who hadn't been introduced has a cross over it. Fade to the police station, Tic is sitting in a room, doing things on the computer, somebody comes in. Tic: I just got some information from the internet...maybe you need to visit the owner of that bar. Mothman: __V__? Why? Tic: Well, I just uncovered this old family tree and it seems like Scarecrow and __V__ have a connection. Some years ago, __V__ must've ran away from home, it's in an old newspaper I found on the internet. Well, in the two years he was gone, his mother adopted a son. Scarecrow. Mothman: But...__V__ wouldn't hurt anyone... Tic: Maybe not. There isn't any more information except that around the time Scarecrow was brought in, __V__ moved to readers row... Mothman: Okay...but I can't interview __V__ right now, incase you forgot, my partner is out there, still missing. I'm going to look for her. Tic: I can't just speak to him on my own! It would be easier if you were there, he knows you. Mothman: Well, it'll have to wait. He leaves the room. Tic slams his fist on the table, fade to Dantes apartment. He, posher, horrorobsessed, XtRaVa and Ferret are in there, drinking. Dante: When will Yuki's open? You lot are crowding up this place. Ferret: Calm down Mary, we'll be gone soon. Posher: Did you lot get a look at the damage that was done? I don't think it'll be open for a while... The phone rings. Dante picks it up, there's a bit of a conversation that ends with "right away". Ferret: Who was that? Dante: It was __V__, we're gonna go down and meet him at Yuki's. Horrorobsessed: I think I'm just gonna head home, I'm getting tired. XtRaVa: Me too. Everyone gets up and leaves. Fade to the woods where Jenna chased Bloodrayne. Mothman and another officer are looking around. Mothman: See anything? Officer: Take a look at this... He points at a twig. There's some hair on there. Officer: Think it's hers? Mothman: Maybe...take it to the lab. I'm gonna look around here for a bit longer. The officer leaves and mothman looks around. There's some rustling in some bushes. He approaches. Mothman: Hello? Hands up, get out of the bush! Two people walk out, a man and a woman, both naked. Mothman: What? Bloody hell! Get home and cover yourself up, kids walk through here! They leave and mothman looks around. He looks to the other end of the trees and sees some movement. HE runs over there. Mothman: Police! Show yourself! The figure runs away. He gets to where it was and looks around. Nobody's there. Suddenly, something rushes from behind and hits him over the head with a branch. The screen goes black. Fade to Yuki's. __V__: Hi guys. I got you over here to run an idea by you. Ferret: Shoot. __V__: How would you feel, if I redecorated the place? Made it new, did it in the style that Newb would've done. Posher: Well, we all knew him so we could help. But where would you get the money? __V__: Crab has offered to give 50% of everything his car shop earns to help, Missmacabre and massacreman are gonna help out...and I was kinda thinking... Dante: Sure, we'll help out. Ferret: I just had an idea...why don't you change the name? __V__: Great minds think alike. Newbs bar? Dante: Newbs place? Ferret: Newbs den? Posher: You lot are thinking too complicated. Newbs. Just then, Tic and another officer come over. Tic: __V__, can we speak to you about Scarecrow666. __V__: Aww crap. Come inside, I'll see you guys later. __V__ locks the door and they all sit down. Fade to the same house that Jenna was attacked in. Mothman wakes up and is faced with Disease. Mothman: Dammit! Jenna? Jenna are you here? Jenna: Moth! Disease: Shutup! He slashes Jennas knee with a knife. She winces but remains quiet. They're in a small room with no light but a candle in the corner. They're not tied down but somehow, mothman knows not to move. There's no furniture in the room and Disease walks out, blowing out the candle. Jenna: Great job. How do we get out now? I was counting on you! Mothman: Shhhh. I have an idea. They took my gun off my but if I'm right... There's the dound of him fumbling around. Jenna: What've you got? Mothman: Incase I have to cut through something, I always keep a razor blade in my inside pocket. Jenna: You can't kill them! Mothman: Them? Jenna: Bloodrayne is here too. Mothman: Damn. Well, i'm not, but I can use it to wedge a floorboard out. There must be a loose one. You can here them fumbling until... Jenna: Over here! Once again, there are some noises then silence. Disease walks in the room and suddenly it's filled with light. At first he just walks in, then Mothman jumps up and hits him in the face with the floorboard. Mothman: Run! He and Jenna leave and are closely followed by Disease. They run out the front door. Mothman: Where are we? Jenna: There are the woods! Disease fires mothmans gun. They keep running until they reach the woods. Mothman trips up and Jenna doesn't see. Disease stands above him, brandishing the gun. Disease: You lot never learn do you? You never get it? You can't stop crime! Crime stops you! There's a thud, then disease falls to the floor. As he falls, you can see ferretchucker in his wheelchair holding a baseball bat. Mothman: What are you- Ferretchucker: I come here to think. Mothman: The bat? ferretchucker: Weirdo's live on Readers Row. Mothman: Well...thanks. You can go now, I'm gonna take this guy in. The screen starts rising until it's about 40ft and birdseye view. Some breathing can be heard and it zooms further to show a figure in a tree looking down at the scene. Ending credits role. The grid of faces appears and Disease gets a cross over it. I think that might be my longest one yet. I got a bit carried away. What do you lot think of the fugitives storyline so far? What is __V__'s secret story? Will Scarecrow ever be caught? 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how soon? And when the hell am I gonna get killed? I'm waiting...
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Opening credits role. Fade into the bar formerly known as Yuki's. __V__ is standing inside whilst some builders are walking around doing odd jobs. A man in a black coat wearing sunglasses is standing beside __V__ and they're talking. __V__: So, If I were to get these gothic tables, where would each one go? Psycom: Well, one would go in the corner, and three would come off it either side. Each table should sit around 5 people. __V__: Can you show me the colour you're going to do the bar again? Psycom: It's a dark brown chestnut colour, it's being used everywhere. __V__: Remember, I want the walls Red. Psycom: Look, you gave me the instruction ol but modern, I'll take it from there. Ferret, Horrorobsessed and XtRaVa walk in. XtRaVa: Hey. Looking good so far. __V__: They haven't done anything. XtRaVa: I was talking about my hair. Ferret: I like the ramp, makes it easy for all of us handicaps. __V__: Got it for $5 off Gbay. Someone broke their back on it and- ferret: That's enough info! Horrorobsessed: What's the scafolding outside for? __V__: New sign. Hasn't been designed yet. Massacreman said his brother was an artist so it's being designed for free. Ferret: I just remembered. What were the police here for? __V__: Just asking about the attack. Fade to the police station, Mothman and Jenna are sitting at a table listening to the tape. Mothman: So, what happened after you ran away? __V__: Do I have to do this? Tic: Just answer the question. __V__: I was never far, three miles at the most. I occasionally checked up on the family. I felt bad but after Dad left, I just couldn't take it. Mum, Grandad and Gran could handle it. But then one day I saw the newspaper. "Distraught family make attempt to get back to normal." I was horrified. They had adopted! Mothman: Scarecrow? __V__: Yeh. He was a year younger than me. I waited a while then decided I had to meet him, so I came back. I...I told them I had joined a cult and couldn't leave. It was the first thing that came to my head. They all bought it and me and Scarecrow were fine. Then, a week later, I met this girl and we started seeing each other. Followed the basic's and on the third date I took her home. Then Scarecrow saw her... Tic: What was so bad? __V__: She was his sister. The sister that had left him on his own when their parents died and had him sent to the orphanage. He couldn't take it. She left me, we never spoke again and Scarecrow sunk into crime. Small things at first, stealing a chocolate bar. Then he got ambitious. Joined a crowd, began attacking. Mum wouldn't believe it. Even when she saw it herself she wouldn't. Years went by and then it happened. Mothman: The fire? __V__: The fire. Didn't like the colour of some guys skin. I caught him running away from the fire. He just pushed me away and ran off laughing. It all went downhill from there. You have his files. When I was 21 he was finally put away for life. Good riddance I said. Mum wasn't the same. When he was transfered here for help with Dr. Zero, she told me to come and keep an eye on things. Not many people knew I was connected. We kept it quiet I had come back and I stayed out of peoples way. I guess he just holds a grudge against me and his... The tape stops. Jenna: What happened? Mothman: Tape ran out. Jenna: Did he say anymore? Mothman: No...we asked but he just went quiet. Could have brought him in but I think we all know what he meant. Jenna: His sister... Mothman: Tic's tracking her down right now. With all the name changes it's hard, but we might manage it. Tic walks in. Tic: Found her. Trufford. 50 miles east. Mothman: Anyone heading there? Tic: No need, got her on the phone, she should be arriving within the hour. Fade to a rural area with a long road running along it. A green car is driving along. In the car is a red haired woman of about thirty. Out of a bush, a woman runs into the road. There's a load thud. Spal stops the car. She rushes out. Spal: Oh god. Oh god. Not now. Not today. She looks at the woman. It's a dummy. She runs back to the ca and checks the backseat. Nobody there. She gets a screwdriver out of the glove compartment and gets out her phone. the camera is in front of her and from behind, the middle seat in the back is pushed down. Somebody crawls through the hold from the boot into the back. Spal finishes her conversation on the phone and carries on driving. The camera changes to an above view of the car driving. A scream is heard then the car turns off the road into a tree. Spal's voice is heard mumbling scared things and sobbing. Ending credits role. |
We're still enjoying this...You're doing a good job, Ferret :)
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A fun read rodent tosser, good job.
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Kinda reminds me of Doctor Who with the spooky cliffhangers. Or Lash LaRue.
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glad you all like it. It's getting harder for me to find time to write it because I'm back at school and the homework is piling up. I'll hopefully carry this on. Just to let you know, tonights episode will feature Dude and Crab.
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Finally I get in there, but it ends up I'm and enterior decorater......I see what you think about me you bastard....... go blow a walrus
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Can I PLEASE resurrect him?...I know some voodoo and black magic and stuff...And I've got this BOOK, it's really awesome, it's covered in human skin and everything :D |
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at the moment, there will be no magic in the soap. When ratings hit rock bottom I might bring Newb back.
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They're doing all that kind of thing in english soaps now too. Dirty Den came back to Eastenders and so id "Cindy".
Anyway, tonights episode. Opening credits role, the grid of faces appears and another unknown face has a cross on it. Fade to the Newb's. __V__ is talking to Massacreman. __V__: So I'm putting up the names of everyone who's helping to fund this on that wall. The workers are good...and fast. This place should be done as soon as Sunday. Massacreman: Good, I'll tell Macabre. See ya later. He leaves. __V__'s phone rings. He answers and as his face turns from normal to shocked, he runs out of the bar. Fade to the police station. Jenna: Why isn't she here by now? She was meant to arrive yesterday! Mothman: There's a party out there searching for her. Tic: Looks like scarecrow is worse than we thought. If he has done anything, it might help us track him down. He's just got out of prison so hopefully he'll have forgotten about covering his tracks. Jenna: I don't know. My dad was one of the officers who caught him, he told me a thing or two about last time. Didn't sound too good. Mothman: I remember. Sitting in this police station...waiting for news of Geddy to come. Worst first week at work imaginable. Somebody comes in. Officer: We've found her car. It doesn't look good. Blood, scratches on the leather. There's a car ready for you sir. Mothman gets up to leave. Jenna stands up. Jenna: I'm coming too. I need to do something...after my last carelessness. They both leave. Fade to a Train station. __V__ is standing, looking around anxiously, when someone walks up to him. Crab: Hi __V__. Sorry, I've been at mums. I've learnt some...things. Come with me. They walk into a small Café. When they sit down a waitress comes and takes their orders. She walks off and they begin talking. __V__: You said something about Newb on the phone. What? Crab: Hold on a minute. You know about what happened in the hospital? __V__: Of course. Crab: Well...my mum came to see me. It was about Newb. __V__: How does she know him? Crab: Let me speak! A few years before I was born...my mum had some...problems. She was all over the place. In her "Time of need", she met a man. He was called Gore. Gorephobia. Anyway, he helped her out but then...seduced her. She got pregnant. __V__: You don't mean? Crab nods. Crab: But there's more. Gore left her as soon as he found out. Newb has known this all his life. Mum sent him away, she said she was too young to have a child, but after a few years, he came back. My aunt Gret always liked him apparently and she had a falling out with mum. Well...she also got pregnant. __V__: What des this mean? You have a cousin? Crab: And Newb had another half brother. A half brother that also knew everything. A half brother who kept his mouth shut about it to everyone else. A half brother that, after reading a letter Newb sent Mum, tortured Newb for 6 months. Literally tortured. Newb also kept quiet. I don't know why, but... __V__: Who was the half brother?! Crab: Dude. The camera cuts to a shot of the police station and Dude is being walked into his cell, smiling. He sits down. VC: So you're dude. Rayne told me everything about you. Dude: Like what? VC: Oh...nothing. Dude: LIKE WHAT?! VC: It's not important. Dude: TELL ME!!! VC: That like you got her pregnant eleven years ago. Dude: What? Fade to a small orphanage where a little boy of about 10 is sitting eating a lolly pop. He has black hair and a slightly rayneish look. A nun walks up to him. Nun: Freak. It's time to sing our songs. Come on. The boy gets up and, still frowning, walks over to a circle of children. They all start singing apart from him. He just stands there, eating the lolly. The camera fades pnto the road where the car went off. There are lots of policemen around. A car pulls up and Mothman and Jenna get out of it. They look at the scene, then turn around as a mtorbike pulls up. An old man takes off his helmet. Jenna: Dad? Vod: Hi. Need any help? Just then, a gun fires and hits the ground at Vods foot. All the policemen run into the trees where it came from. The camera shoots to about 150 yards infront of them and under some leaves, a small bomb is seen ticking away. The ending credits role. |
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Since when did I get in jail? Why am I in jail??
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lets have some more comments!
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Can you bring the White Ferret into it? It can have a cask of whiskey for people who get trapped in the snow, maybe
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Also, Bloodrayne should really go nuts...she should destroy furniture as well as attacking people.
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Rayne will gradually go nuts.
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