Agreed! This story is really moving along! :)

WOW!...I finally got to read all of this and it's AMAZING!

Unfortunately, I'm already dead :p...Oh well, Dustin is dead, too so we'll just being doing it in hell...until we crawl back out and take revenge on Gore...Mwahahaha

Just kidding...I'll get him in his nightmares ;)


This truly is incredible Ferret, and I agree that you should try to get something published...I know it's difficult to get your foot in the door, but you're still young, if you start now you could really get somewhere by the time you're 20...I have tremendous faith in your abilities :)

Thanks. Sorry about killing you and all, but I needed a plot device to move Gore forward.

And I really will start looking into publishing.

Woo Hoo!...And I really will buy one of your books...I mean that sincerely

Wow, I just finally got all caught up too. Holy crap! I'm having an alien birth! Really didn't see that coming. :eek: :D Keep it up Ferret, great story!

Heh heh...it reads a little like an episode of Futurama!

IS that a good or bad thing?

You've written some really good stuff here FC.

Its not easy to come up with something original like this so you should be pleased with what you've created.

That it reads like an episode of Futurama? That's a GREAT thing.

This is really going awesome, Ferret! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Thoughts, comrades?

Interesting so far.

Awesome, of course

Looking good, Ferret! I can't wait for the different parties to come together.

Certain parties will meet, others won't, unfortunately.

Also, at this point I will say, if your character dies, it is nothing personal. Quite a few will die before the end. I've kept these people alive through many situations, and it would be unrealistic for them to come out virtually casualty free.

I will completely blame you of course if my character is at dinner and a creature comes out of her chest.





:p

Wow. Good work.

Thanks. Apologies for your rather lack luster death, but I feel it served a purpose of showing that Secundum has lost a lot of power, and it also hindered the creatures making their way to another ship.

Thoughts of the new part?

Excellent, of course!

I actually thought I had already posted. :eek:

Great death scene for Doc! Loved it.

The last episode was really good too, I was shocked how Roshiq took Mona and me out. Interesting interchange between Gore and Chrono. Really looking forward to the next one! :)

It's so...creeepy...I love it :)

That's what I was hoping for. I was trying to lull my readers into believing that there was hope for the last few people, but so far Doc Faustus, Massacre Man, Papillon Noir (you), Monalisa and Hammerfan have all died recently. Gorephobia is as good as dead and there will be more.

Glad to hear you're all enjoying it.

I also always try to kill myself in a really pitiful way.

I'm not dead. I just went home to tend to my burn wounds and won't be in the rest of the story. That's how I'm going to interpret it anyway.

:eek: How did you know the truth? :rolleyes: :p

INT: Space bathroom in space

Massacre Man: Ah, space icy hot, thank god you're sentient here in the future and understand that I only need to cool off.
Icy Hot: I love you...

Wow! That was pretty cool. Good episode. I liked the twist. The tattoo was clever. :)

Thanks.

For a long time I was thinking about who Freak would be. Dante had obviously realized because he mentioned it. He's seen it right away. I was considering it to be V's girlfriend who was seen with him in the very first episode, but I thought that would be unfair on Freak. Then I considered maybe an ex captain of the ship, but having it as a previously unmentioned character might be a let down. So, I went for him and V actually being each other.

Really impressive job, Ferret! I enjoyed reading that.


It would be good if one of the mods can move just the story posts together and have it in the horror fiction section. You should be proud of yourself over this.

:)

Thanks. In case you're interested, I did another one last year set back in medieval times called HDC: Darkness and Daggers. http://www.horror.com/forum/showthread.php?t=35336

And it'd be cool if a mod did that.

It would honestly be easier for ferret to open a new thread, and just cut and paste entries.

But I'm lazy! :p

And what did you think of it? You were probably the only one who had a real happy ending and you were a dick in it.

a very good read man!

Thanks. To begin with I wondered how I would stretch it out to at least 30 episodes but by the end I almost had to cut it down!

I really enjoyed it. I thought it was great that one of the biggest jerks in the story made it out home free.

As far as the thread, I'll see what I can do.

Nevermind. We had two mods working on it at once, apparently :D

http://horror.com/forum/showthread.php?t=50855

Edited some posts to remove some out-of-story stuff.

that's cool. Just glad to see it's gone for good! I was worried there.

Oh, and sorry for killing you off and all V.

A very fitting end to a great story, Ferret. I liked it.

Keep up the good work, kid.

btw, I rated it 4 stars out of 5.