| Sharkchild |
11-05-2007 02:24 PM |
I am glad to see you got your DVDs! Thanks again for participating. I will definitely have a competition like this again---perhaps during the holidays.
Also, make sure you keeping checking out my episodes and giving me feedback when you can. My third episode just went up and it is called What The Flesh Cannot Keep. I think it is quite an interesting story; I take a little different perspective on the limitations of a ghost-like being (though the plot of the story goes much deeper than that).
Here is an excerpt from the story that I also included in the post on my site:
The haunter behind space was there when I opened the back door and stepped out into the fading light of the sun’s decent. The air was shallow, almost brittle, and I felt its coarseness claw at my lungs in breath. Around me, paleness seized the atmosphere like a fever sacks the color of flesh. The pallor was so severe that it brought about a fatigued contrast between the sun and its surroundings, causing flickering beams of glare to stretch out with hands of keen deception.
On the soil just outside my farmhouse, I sensed it, beyond the bounds of the seen, watching me intently. It had worlds to devour with its attention, but it gave that attention—at this moment—only to me. Through my mind’s eye, I was given a perception of its face through an unwarranted form of communication. The medium of imagery was so fierce that its face was projected, most likely in some hallucinatory manner, in the sky before me. My actual eyes gazed beyond matter into its sinister demeanor.
Listen to the whole thing at TheDarkVerse.com! |
