*******bump*******

I repeat - BUMP!!!

Livin it HDC is going on "hiatus" for a while. I will carry it on, I'm just not sure when.

Are you putting it on hold becasue your going to be real busy or because nobody's is leaving comments?

a bit of both

It's Back!!!
 

Opening credits role, it's been re-done with a new theme tune. Cut to a shot of Newbs. It's open and flooding with people.

__V__ is serving some people.

__V__: I haven't seen you two around here for ages.

Alkytrio: We went backpacking after Crabs wedding disaster.

Americanmaniac: Yeh, Africa is really pretty cool.

__V__: Where's Cheebs?

Alkytrio: He'll be here soon, he's just gone to visit his mum.

Posher wheels ferret up to the bar.

Alkytrio: JESUS CHRIST!!!

Americanmaniac: What the hell happened to you?!

Ferret: Rayne.

Alkytrio: We heard she was the maniac.

Americanmaniac: I'm the maniac.

Ferret: She's still at large, but not around here. Although, she still does damage...

Cut to a shot of Gore on his sofa, he's got a blanket over him.

Disease: It was two months ago. Get over it.

Gore: Get over it? Dad died. He was killed.

Disease: He was never our fucking Dad, and if you call him that again, I will hit you.

Disease walks out. Cut to the police station. Mothman is sitting opposite Dude.

Mothman: We can make things better for you. Just tell us, where is she?

Dude: With your mum.

Tic: Help us out here. she hasn't come to help you. She's forgotten about you.

Dude starts humming Smoke on the Water.

Tic: Take him back to his cell.

Mothman and some others guide him back. VampiricClown pipes up.

VC: I have some useful information!

Dude looks at VC, worried.

VampiricClown: You see, a long time ago, Dude and Rayne did the dir-

Dude: Fuck you clown cunt!

VampiricClown: That wasn't very nice!

Mothman: Tell us what you know, now.

Dude: Tell them and you die.

Mothman: Shut up Dude!

VampiricClown: I have one word. Freak.

Dude goes mad, and breaks free of the guards and begins smashing the bars of the cell wildly. One of the guards draws his guns.

Mothman: STOP!

The guard shakes and brings his gun down. Mothman draws another gun and shoots it at Dude's back. It's a tranquilizer. Dude carries on smashing the cells. Three more darts are fired. He slumps to the floor.

Mothman: Freak?

Cut to a small house. It's full of people, partying. the camera goes up into the attic. Two people are in there.

Freak: Mummy. When's Daddy coming back?

Rayne: Soon. But remember what I said. You can't keep on what you're doing.

Freak: Killing?

Rayne: Yes.

freak: But you and Daddy do it.

Rayne: And look where it's got us. You can't. I love you and will stay with you as long as I can, but I'm scared...

Freak: Of what?

Rayne: What will happen if you don't stop. I love you and would do anything to protect you, but that doesn't mean it's right. Not right for you. You deserve a good life. Now remember what I told you to do?

Freak nods. He goes into a corner, into his sleepin back and piles some boxes infront of him. Cut to another new place. It's a shed. Scarecrow and Someone else are in there.

Scarecrow: Tonight, we rest.

Murderdoll: Tommorow, we get revenge.

They look out through the shed door to the house across the street. Sounds of partying can be heard coming from there. Closing credits role.

yay! i am in this!!

you've been in it for a while Mahoney.

i know but i like seeing myself come up everytime you do one

makes me smile

cool. I like writing them and was sad when I stopped but they're back. Next episode is on tuesday.