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Freak 11-17-2007 03:43 AM

Great job so far mass.And the funny thing is I actually work at K-Mart.

ferretchucker 11-17-2007 08:29 AM

No...fudgeing...way.

massacre man 11-17-2007 12:12 PM

Dudeman likes to drink a lot too, and I say "fuck" a lot so it's like crazy.

ferretchucker 11-17-2007 12:57 PM

And get this. I love ferrets!




NEXT PART!!!

ferretchucker 11-18-2007 05:39 AM

Murderer!!!!

Freak 11-19-2007 06:50 AM

Ha Ha ferret's dead.Just kidding.But this is going great man.Can't wait to see what happens next.

ferretchucker 11-19-2007 07:07 AM

you deserve to be arrested!

ferretchucker 11-20-2007 06:32 AM

those poor poor souls.


Especially mine.

ferretchucker 11-22-2007 08:18 AM

I actually laughed out loud on that last moment. I can picture it all right now even down to the elevator music. Keep it up I'm really enjoying this.

massacre man 11-22-2007 08:40 AM

Wow, this has been going on for nearly a month and there's about 3 or 4 more additions I can think of unless I figure out something else cool between now and then. I wonder how long this would be if it were an actual movie.

ferretchucker 11-22-2007 01:32 PM

Wow. I think I'll wait until around a week after this has finished to write mine.

massacre man 11-22-2007 02:36 PM

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Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 649019)
Wow. I think I'll wait until around a week after this has finished to write mine.

And then I'll start beginning plans for part 9.

Not really, after this I'm fucking done.

ferretchucker 11-23-2007 06:53 AM

Good storyline, but you have to give the little buggers a nickname!

ferretchucker 11-24-2007 12:05 AM

This is great. I can really understand Your character- just wanting to live his life with nothing wrong, forced into being the hero all the time etc.

massacre man 11-24-2007 09:00 AM

Replies from more people than just Ferretchucker would be nice too. :)

Disease 11-24-2007 09:01 AM

Soory man, I haven't finished reading it yet.. I like to read a big chunk at a time, so I generally hold off and read the movies in 2 or 3 sittings.

ferretchucker 11-24-2007 12:51 PM

At least you know I still love you! :D

I like where this is going, although a re-animated Ferret would be nice

ABnormaL 11-24-2007 01:59 PM

You killed me off?! Again?! *weeps* lol.

I'm the same as Disease, I've been waiting to read it in big chunks recently. I've enjoyed it though, loads of fun =D

massacre man 11-24-2007 02:17 PM

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Originally Posted by ABnormaL (Post 649507)
You killed me off?! Again?! *weeps* lol.

And you were giving birth a good 75% of the time.

I'll do the next part after I watch The Simpsons and King of the Hill, but for now, The Simpsons and King of the Hill.

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 12:36 AM

Dun Dun DUUUUUUUUUUNNNN!!!

This is a really good story and I like the sum up of it all. I can't wait for the next part.

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 08:20 AM

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...oShadySide.jpg

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 09:29 AM

was that the end? Can I start on my one now? Can I? Huh? Huh? Huh?

massacre man 11-25-2007 09:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 649675)
was that the end? Can I start on my one now? Can I? Huh? Huh? Huh?

Does it say "The End" on it?

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 09:40 AM

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Originally Posted by massacre man (Post 649664)
That poster's actually kinda nice. I'd like to see Despare do another one.

The creature moves it's tail forward, the two jump back, Disease quickly leaps forward and sticks the machete into the creature's stomach. The creature then looks at the wound and the machete sticking out of it. The creature roars and swings it tail toward Disease, Massacre Man takes the axe to it, the axe doesn't go through all the way and is lodged into it's tail, Massacre Man keeps a grip on it until the creature swings it's tail about and throws Massacre Man up through the hole in the ceiling, he doesn't come back down. Disease turns and starts running, the creature follows, it doesn't have a problem keeping up, Disease opens a door into a winding stairwell. He gets midway up the stairs when the beast grabs his leg, Disease flips over the side of the steps and hits the ground arm-first with a crack, he starts running back the way he came, his arm looks broken, he hides in one of the rooms, leaving the door open, he hides in front of the door, after a few moments the beast burst through the wall on the other side of the room, as soon as it does Disease makes his way out and back up the stairs without being noticed, while on the second floor he makes his way past the infected trying to hold him down, he gets to the area the creature fell through, several bodies are laying about with their heads splattered on the floor or their chests and stomachs torn open, one of the cabinets starts to move, Neverending bursts out and grabs Disease by his shoulders

[B]Neverending[/B}: Please! Please! You have to get me out of here.

[B]Disease[/B}: Be quiet.

Neverending: It killed them!

Disease: Shut up.

Neverending: They're all helping him, why are they helping him!?

Disease puts his hand over Neverending's mouth to quiet him but it's too late, the beast storms back up the stairs and into the room it's tail swings and throws Disease across the room, he lands next to Massacre Man's weapon belt, all of the knives are missing. The beast holds Neverending to the floor and steadies it's tail over Neverending's head, Neverending tries pushing the machete into the beast further but it does nothing, the very tip of the machete is now poking through the beast's skin a small bit but it isn't phased. The axe is still jammed inside of it's tail, Disease debates with himself whether he should try getting hold of the axe or not when his thoughts are interrupted at the sound of The Beast's tail entering Neverending's head, it pumps the same thing it pumped into ABnormal into Neverending, it all goes directly to his brain, killing Neverending almost instantly. Disease stands up and starts to run back down the hall, the monster pulls it's tail out of Neverending and starts to chase after Disease, he passes Massacre Man who is standing calm and collected in the middle of the hallway despite the blood coming from his head, he has one hand behind his back.

Disease: Run!

Massacre Man: Wait a fucking minute.

Massacre Man pulls his hand out from behind his back, he is holding all of the remaining baby creatures by their tails, they've all been skinned and gutted, the beast stops running and stares at Massacre Man, he then chucks them across the room. The Beast turns around and runs over to the bodies of his children who have just splattered against the window. Red and Blue lights can be seen flashing from far off in the window.

Massacre Man: Thank God that worked...

Massacre Man swings the rifle around and aims it at The Beast.

Disease: Wait, you can't shoot a gun in a hospital.

Massacre Man looks back at Disease and grins. Cut to Freak sitting outside in Dudeman's car listening to the radio, the rest of the alley can be seen behind him, including the police cars far off in the back, Freak leans over to look and see what is in Massacre Man's bag, glass can be heard breaking, The Beast falls from the window with Massacre Man holding securely onto it's back. Massacre Man tackled it out of the window. The Beast hits the ground face-first. Massacre Man stands up and shoots it in the back of the head a few times. He kicks it to make sure it's dead, it isn't moving. Freak gets out and runs over.

Freak: What is that?

Massacre Man: I think it's their dad.

Freak: Is it dead?

Massacre Man (Relieved): Yeah.

The infected start pouring out into the alley, Massacre Man looks in shock.

Masacre Man: Shit, I forgot about them.

The police start to open fire at the infected.

Massacre Man: If they see us they're probably gonna lock me up again, let's get the fuck out of here.

Freak: Alright.

Freak gets back in the driver's seat, Massacre Man picks his bag up and sits down, Freak and Massacre Man drive away from the hospital safely.

The End




Why yes. Yes it does.

massacre man 11-25-2007 09:42 AM

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Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 649682)
Why yes. Yes it does.

Stop tampering my shit, nazi. You're waiting a week anyway, why do you care if there's one more part or not?

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 11:42 AM

I changed my mind. I wait not 7 days, but 7 minutes after I've read the final part.

ferretchucker 11-25-2007 01:00 PM

What do you think?

Poster 1
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...themovie-1.jpg

Poster 2
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...DCpart7ero.jpg


Which is better?

ferretchucker 11-26-2007 07:14 AM

nice ending. Very conclusize. Too bad it's not over yet!

massacre man 11-26-2007 10:24 AM

1 reply. :(

missmacabre 11-26-2007 10:28 AM

I liked it :D

Especially how you got to finally watch Tales from the Crypt.

ferretchucker 11-26-2007 10:42 AM

Hey, just to let you know, part 7ero is up and running, so some replies to that would be nice as well

massacre man 11-26-2007 11:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by missmacabre (Post 649948)
Especially how you got to finally watch Tales from the Crypt.

Whole reason I wanted to do this one. :D

novakru 11-26-2007 11:44 AM

I LOVED IT MM!
Applause, applause, applause!

woo-woo!
Encore:cool:

We will all be saying we knew you back in the day while you were young and wierd when you're a big shit writer:)

massacre man 11-26-2007 11:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by novakru (Post 650031)
I LOVED IT MM!
Applause, applause, applause!

woo-woo!
Encore:cool:

We will all be saying we knew you back in the day while you were young and wierd when you're a big shit writer:)

Sorry you didn't have any lines, I had an idea for a flashback of you getting killed, but i thought it was stupid, so I left it out.

novakru 11-26-2007 06:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by massacre man (Post 650033)
Sorry you didn't have any lines, I had an idea for a flashback of you getting killed, but i thought it was stupid, so I left it out.

No lines, no problem:cool:
I really dig your work man:)

massacre man 11-26-2007 06:11 PM

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Originally Posted by novakru (Post 650222)
No lines, no problem:cool:
I really dig your work man:)

Thank you very much, but still sorry I just made you a corpse. There were a few different small parts I left out, namely Rod killing you and some really (purposely) cheesy and retarded Animal House-style end montage that I joked about one night when I was hanging out with Dudeman.

Freak 11-28-2007 04:49 AM

Great job mass.Loved the ending and every part in between.The best was that I didn't die either.Can't wait for you to do another one.


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