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I like these parts. I'm obviously the best charcter. I just hope I get to meet __V__. This is the third film __V__ and a ferretchucker charcter have been in together and none of them have met. Also, there are some references to past movies, but this feels very olden timey. Is it just set in a place where they use horses instead of cars?
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12 chimes ring in the distance. Midnight. A harsh wind is blowing through the house. Hammerfan is writhing around on the table, the chains around her arms and legs rattle.
Hammerfan: Please. My dad manages a hotel in Paris. I can get you money. The cloaked figure is fiddling around with something on a table. The sound of scarping can be heard. There is only one light in the room. The candle. Figure: Why would I want your money? I have no use for it. Hammerfan: Please. You seem angry. I can help you. Figure: Help me? HELP ME?! The person turns around to reveal themself to be Rayne! Rayne: I was killed. Killed and brought back to life. I got my revenge though, and it was sweet! Hammerfan: Killed? You...you're a zombie?! Rayne: If you have to put it so bluntly, yes. I was killed by your pathetic friend out there's little helper. But I got revenge. Not so long ago I was drowned ina lake. Next thing I knew I was being held in some hairy red arms. My monkey friend. Hammerfan: That...thing? Rayne: Shut the fuck up! He brought me back and took me here. now I know why. He is more powerful than God and more loathesome than Satan. You pathetic humans, I'm ashamed to say I was one of you, have nothing. You eat, cry and destroy. Zero is alone. But not for long. Not more will humans destroy or hate. You will be one. Hammerfan: How? How can you- Rayne: I said shut up! Here's one I made earlier. She pulls on a chain and something rises from the floor. It's a sheet of metal with someone tied to it. Alkytrio. Hammerfan: Oh my god. That's...that's my driver. Rayne: Was your driver. Observe. Number 6, what will you do. He speaks in a cross between a moan and a cough. Alky: Ex...ist. I will br...ing...more...here. Rayne: He exists to exist. He does not eat. He will die within days. But not before giving birth. Hammerfan: What?! Rayne: I have made an artificial womb. I used frogs eggs and put them inside it. His own "fertiliser" will help out. It will produce a race that will only live for a few weeks, but will not need to eat and will be born in huge groups. Hammerfan: But...why? Rayne: To keep the Plants alive. We breathe in Oxygen, and outCarbon Dioxide. Plants do the reverse. You humans destroy the earth, but no longer. Hammerfan: You'll destroy humanity to keep the trees alive... Rayne: Yeh. And because it's fun. Meanwhile, outside the house... __V__: Run faster! He's catching up! __V__ and disease are running away from the red figure that is Zero. Zero: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAhAHAhAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Disease: Why are we running? You have that super strength thingy! __V__: I'm weak! Too weak. BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! The sound of bullets fill the night air. Zero falls down. So does __V__. Disease: STOP!!! WE MEAN NO HARM!!! Ferretchucker: I shot someone! I actaully shot someone! Disease: Stop! Who are you? Tic: The police! Put your hands up and step into the light. Disease walks into the moonlight with his hands up. Disease: You shot the wrong guy! __V__ is with me! __V__ groans. Marya: What about him? He signals to Zero. Disease: Shoot him all you- HHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPP!!!! Disease: It's the girl. __V__ jumps up and pulls something out of his arm. The bullet. __V__: Come on! He starts running. Disease: WAIT!!!!! __V__ stops. Disease: Zero's gone!!! A manic laughter fills the air. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! |
Interesting, young man. But you left more questions than answers.
I think we all will be well served with waiting for the original storyteller to complete his version, rather than a new take on it. Edgar |
Laughter in the dark. Hammerfan wakes up faced with a horrible sight, still shaken from the dream of fish people and a zombie lady.
MM, can you take over, I re-read my thing and Raven has a point. I'm waiting for you to do HDC VI so I can get started on Part 7ero. So in answer to what happened just up there. It was a dream. |
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__V__, if you're reading this, could you PM me a short description of your plans for later so I don't trample them too badly? |
Done.
Its all yours, mass. |
A big hall with a stage. A young man is playing the piano. He finishes playing and bows to the audience, then goes backstage. Nobody is there. He looks around. Suddenly a hairy red hand grabs him by the neck and pulls him up.
Cut to a shot of the audience cheering. The curtains on stage open again to reveal the pianist's head on a spike with a huge Z carved into it. Everyone screams and runs for the door. It's jammed. Suddenly, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!! HDC The Movie Part 7ero Coming soon |
Very nice, mass. Almost exactly how I would have proceeded.
Keep going...this will be REALLY good...I can feel it... |
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Great story so far. Really entertaining and I'm always wondering what's coming next. I think you should bring Horrorobsessed back into this. She never died did she?
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Besides....oh nevermind. So far so good, MM.
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This is getting really good. I can't wait for the next part. Where am I and Disease? WHERE?!
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Or where is GORE!!!???
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That's some funny stuff!~
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Good work. This is good stuff.
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excellent. My end was a bit sad though. Broght a tear to my eye. And the tear hurt because I CANT BLINK ANYMORE!!! Anyway, I'll be back in some shape or form. Whether in this one, the sequel or the sequel after that (HDC Part 7ero, I'm writing it!)
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Poor fortunato. Poor ferretchucker. He should be one of the wolves! I can see it now. Disease spots a wolf running at him with a big hole in his head and....NO EYELIDS!!!
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Very nice and fitting conclusion. Excellent job, mass.
~¤~ HAPPY HALLOWEEN ALL ~¤~ |
nice ending. Now, Can you hurry up with part 6 so I can start on part 7ero?
Also, since HDC The Movie III, it has been tradition to involve a character named Ferretchucker. :) |
Nice job MM.
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Thanks for the kind words, gents.
I'm glad I didn't disappoint you __V__. |
We have some incredibly talented people here, for REAL...Must come from watching all those horror movies :D
Excellent start _V_, and an amazing job at picking up and wrapping it up MM...WOW, you guys should REALLY make some movies *Anxiously awaits the next sequel* HEY...Aren't sequels supposed to SUCK...Especialy when you get up to this many? :p Looks like you guys are even BETTER than 'big guys' :) |
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