This story is off to a great start!:D

I...am...BADASS!!! :cool:

Keep up the good work man! :D

ah, very nice.
the return is brutal!

It's the most frightening penguin I have ever seen!

Good stuff.

Return stole the first episode comprehensively, but I am still waiting on my smartass moments.

I think it's off to an exciting start and already it seems better than the previous ones.

Yeh. Thanks. I'll be doing episodes every monday, friday and saturday if possible. Thanks for all the feedback and don't worry everyone who has requested to be in it.

If you look carefully gore, you may notice a foreshadowing of your character.

And Despare and V, your characters will be expanded on in the next few episodes.

Amazing so far Ferret!I love it!

Its really good,you are so creative:)

Thanks guys. NExt piece will be up thursday.