I wasn't commenting ALL on the dialouge, and besides, I'm trying to help you. And this is the EXAT same way I take critisism on my scripts, go to Simply scripts.com and search for my scripts... people act like dicks and make fun of my scripts.

so, if you guys can give me some ideas for my scripts, that'll be great.

scaryminda15
 

you know what i hate to say this but i agree with posh. let michael die because his sister is dead and she said "ill see you in hell" just before she fell but if i know the movies that might say she didnt die at all because they made us believe michael was dead in h20 when she cut his head off with the ax but it turned out to be the paramatic. just cant wait to see halloween ten.



here is idea there is this girl who loves the world but the world hates her because of how she looks, acts,and spells. she gets upset about it and gets determined to make sure she spells words write and then turns own others and if they dont spell a word right she kills them and spells the word right just before they die.

what do u think of my script so far?