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fortunato 04-05-2010 04:54 PM


_____V_____ 04-05-2010 10:56 PM

Short Measure for the Gabriel Hound

Each time I read a cloud’s dark countenance
or watch two crows stitch out a warning
in the clear blue air, I can’t forget

the Bradwell miners, bound for home
without a lamp to guide them, night as heavy
as the earth they’d toiled beneath all day.

They heard the long grass stir. They stood
dead still. A beam, sharp as a skinning knife
shone from the moon down to the hill

and carved the huge shape of a hound; a dog so quick
they’d barely taken flight before they heard it bay
and felt its harsh breath at their heels. They ran

full speed with burning lungs until the dawn,
until the daylight overtook them and they went,
grim-faced, down to the mine

to meet their certain fate. Remember them
as you lie in bed, when the empty house
has fallen still, and you stare through open curtains

at a starless sky, imagine it’s a dog’s
black flank that passes you, bound
for somewhere else tonight.

- Helen Mort.

ferretchucker 04-06-2010 03:46 AM

Gabriel's MY name! I feel special :D

fortunato 04-06-2010 07:13 PM

A b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z!

_____V_____ 04-08-2010 03:45 AM

Granite Sea

Push open the massive iron gate
Now tell me what you see
Be forewarned the hours late
As you travel the granite sea

Walk across the rain soaked ground
You feel of sudden gloom
The granite waves are all around
So many many tombs

Smell the rain soaked flowers
Which sit upon the grass
Your body begins to cower
As you hear a ghostly laugh

Listen to the ghostly voices
That's come from some where near
You do not have many choices
When your bodies gripped with fear

Shiver as you hear them
They call out your name
All you can do is fear them
Calling from the grave

Wonder who is calling
Calling you from where
Your bravery quickly falling
In terror and despair

Think to your self it didn't happen
You didn't hear that sound
But you cant help your reaction
As your heart begins to pound

But now there is just one thing
They think that you should know
There's no reason for fearing
So for now, you can go

All they want to tell you
Is that one day, here you'll be
Like the many many waves
In a cold, granite sea.

- M.A. Tolli.

fortunato 04-08-2010 07:49 PM

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ferretchucker 04-09-2010 08:11 AM

There isn't much can be said. I read all the poems and they're rather good but I didn't feel the need to put that in writing. I'm just looking forward to the BR III (hence my new signature. Notice the three dots have a double meaning? One because obviously the preds are usually in this thing and because it's the third one.)

fortunato 04-09-2010 12:03 PM

Oh, I thought we were trying to make this thread 15 pages long.

VampiricClown 04-09-2010 12:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fortunato (Post 855954)
Oh, I thought we were trying to make this thread 15 pages long.

I could make it 15 pages long in about 30 minutes. But I'm not that bored.

Just face it. "facebook" killed everything. Most all online communities are dead or slowly dying.

ferretchucker 04-09-2010 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampiricClown (Post 855957)
I could make it 15 pages long in about 30 minutes. But I'm not that bored.

Just face it. "facebook" killed everything. Most all online communities are dead or slowly dying.

LEAVE FACEBOOK ALONE! I think YOU killed everything!

Sorry...it's, it's facebook. It gets inside your head.

_____V_____ 04-10-2010 09:59 AM

The Touch Of Fear

Have you ever felt the touch of fear
On nights so all alone
Sitting tensely in a spot
Waiting for some ghastly moan
To occur but silence coats the room
You feel like something's waiting
Just waiting in the gloom

As I was walking down a street
Through the broken slums
To get somewhere a bit faster
I began to hear some ugly hums
Coming from a crumbled home
Beat down by time's fist
Where something horrific roams

I didn't want to venture there
But the sounds drew me in
Where I saw something so evil
Seeing it must be a sin
Its face was a jumble of freakish teeth
With a black tongue that slivered
Over two blank white eyes beneath

Then shrieks escaped its repulsive maw
That sounded like some unholy music score
Of tortured screams of people
That it had eaten before
Then the white eyes became alive
And somehow forced me to stare
At them, which made my stomach dive


In those eyes I saw unbearable things
Of men being ripped apart
Of drinking of blood and eating of gore
And that was just the start
Then I was thrown into its jaws
By some unknown force
That felt like gnarled claws

After much pain and ripping sounds
I was cast into the cold
Where I live breathing my last
A lone and forgotten mold
I think I know what gave me fright
What killed and tortured I
I think that fear itself murdered me tonight

Now on nights all so alone
Void of anybody but you
You hear a sound and become afraid
Don't deny it, it could be true
It could be fear lurking around
Waiting for you to dismiss it
So it then can pounce without a sound.

- Roger Bergeron.

VampiricClown 04-10-2010 10:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 855962)
LEAVE FACEBOOK ALONE! I think YOU killed everything!

Sorry...it's, it's facebook. It gets inside your head.

Very true...

Marley's Ghost 04-13-2010 12:07 PM

You've failed the challenge
It's only six pages long
Like the captain of your ship
It's time to sing my swan song

No tombstones to compose
The battle royale is done
Goodbye to the tournaments
The end has begun

Maybe in the future
The forum will thrive
But for now it's adieu
I'm no longer alive

ferretchucker 04-14-2010 07:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marley's Ghost (Post 856408)
You've failed the challenge
It's only six pages long
Like the captain of your ship
It's time to sing my swan song

No tombstones to compose
The battle royale is done
Goodbye to the tournaments
The end has begun

Maybe in the future
The forum will thrive
But for now it's adieu
I'm no longer alive

Well this doesn't seem too good now, does it?

_____V_____ 04-17-2010 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marley's Ghost (Post 856408)
You've failed the challenge
It's only six pages long
Like the captain of your ship
It's time to sing my swan song

No tombstones to compose
The battle royale is done
Goodbye to the tournaments
The end has begun

Maybe in the future
The forum will thrive
But for now it's adieu
I'm no longer alive

Not so soon, poetic apparition. Get ready to carve some tombstones.


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