i can tell u two are well into your writing, when i read the story i dint notice any mistakes until you mentioned it. but my writing is so bad anyway.

It kept my attention which is a big plus and I really enjoyed the idea you explored in it. A Very pleasant to read-cheers :)

Villain, I don't know how I missed this! I really liked your story!

Thank you both!

I really appreciate the feedback. Lately i've found it really hard to write and i havent even been able to edit the novel i just finished so it really means alot that you liked it. Hopefully ill be able to write some more soon.