Roderick Usher |
07-30-2008 10:46 PM |
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Originally Posted by neverending
(Post 717905)
Did you watch it all the way through, Rod? It was bugging me too, until the part where it finally turns into a drawing of a face... then at the end it has the film's logo and that shape is in it- it's a visual pun- "Hair of the Dog" -- a dog's hair...
I actually thought that was kind of clever.
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clever is fine, but never be annoying... kind of a crucial element of any film is that it draws an audience in and that bit of "cleverness" detracts from everything going on onscreen.
this is not a flame, this is a note... you put it out there for criticism and I'm telling you that if the shit on the screen is supposed to be dog's hair in the shot, then you went way too far with a bad idea. Honestly I couldn't be bother to click it and watch it again because I found the "device" completely off-putting
good luck with your filmmaking and I salute you for doing it...
now go do it better
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