Originally Posted by ferretchucker (Post 581850)

About thirty people are in a small hospital. There are also around ten staff working there. Suddenly, everything goes into quarrantine and nobody is sure why. They all get together when the lights go off. When they come back on, there's a type writer with a message on it saying


"Hello, I have been noticing the people in this hospital arent very friendly to each other. I think they don't take enough notice of each other. The staff don't comfort patients or talk to them very much and the patients are constantly sitting there, ignoring each other. If one is suddenly in pain or starts crying, the others simply look away and wait for the nurses.
I do not enjoy rudeness, and I think it's about time each of you got more social. One of us, me, has written this message. If you can guess who it is before three o'clock in the morning, five hours from now, i will shut off the bomb. Guess wrong and you will only have enough time to say goodbye before you are going tothe great beyond. The phones are shut off. I suggest you get talking and get to know each other and maybe, you will realize who I am. Type the name on the typewriter and leave. Every time a new guess is made, the lights will switch off, the type writer will be moved and I will type my response. Happy hunting."

The film will carry on from that point. The main character will be a twenty year old girl. Whenever a guess is made and the lights are switched off, throughout the hospital, all you can hear is the typing. Several characters will try and outsmart the writer but when the lights comeback on, the people are found dead.

Near the end they will work out that the person is a writer who was always found on the stairs in what seemed like a violent state of panic so nobody bothered with him. He used a remote overide on the lights and simply ran up the stairs with a silenced gun and killed those trying to outsmart him and wait near where the typewriter was. Besides the fact that when the lights went off, because it had been light everything seemed pitch black and their eyes didn't have time to adjust.

At the end the writer is pushed off the roof and the remaining three people eascape just before the bomb goes off. When they're in the police station the lights go off and all they can hear is a typewriter. Then the credits role. Can anybody think of a name?

Originally Posted by chaibill (Post 581674)

yeah i like that one steakhouse666 but the title needs to be smarterhow about

black and blue steak

Originally Posted by chaibill (Post 582156)

this reads nicely a little saw"ish" but i think it would keep me in my seat and not thinking "i could make a better movie" like when i watched TOURISTAS the other night.

Originally Posted by Posher778 (Post 582899)

A magician , trying to find the most spectacular trick, has a volunteer blast him in the chest with a shotgun, after which he falls backwards through the 4 story window, and splatters on the pavement. The twist at the end is, he threatened his twin brother's family so he would die, so that he, in his blind obsession with fame, would be nationally reknowned for his mysterious survival. (the end of the fil m is him walking into the room and having everyone flip out at him still being *alive*

A short film, maybe an hour tops.