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scaryminda15 02-22-2006 11:53 AM
scaryminda15
 
i love school
i like playing pool
boys drool
girls rule
i rock
why do men smell like a smelly sock


ok what do u think?

Posher778 02-22-2006 01:55 PM
your rhyme scheme is horrible.


Do i sound like simon cowell?

lionels_mother 02-22-2006 02:24 PM
*shudders*

h0rr0rdiva 02-22-2006 07:00 PM
Those are great, the long 1's can be good at times when you need to express a certain feeling, and the short 1's are good when you need to just write.

I would put a poem I wrote, but I hate being judged.:(

Posher778 02-22-2006 07:10 PM
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Originally posted by trippin_the_rif
Come on HD. Ignore the insignificant goof balls who ridicule. Some of us are actually pretty nice.:)
liar.

h0rr0rdiva 02-22-2006 07:13 PM
Ok here is a small piece of 1 I did a few years ago.

...as I gaze upon the beauty of his face,
my heart skips,
My trembling knees knock as we embrace,
my lips drawn together.
Our bodies formed one in the moonlight....

Thats all I'm Going to do sorry.

Marroe 02-22-2006 08:01 PM
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Originally posted by stubbornforgey
heres a song i wrote

I saw shining star in his eyes
i felt a warming glow in his arms
but when we kissed..
i knew...I'd miss
The freind , I turned to for love..

The words he spoke had me in a trance
his warming touch took me to paradise
when we were through
i knew ..i'd lose..
the freind i turned to for love

I never meant for this to begin
em sorry now i let my heart win
the price i'd pay to turn back a day
and have him as a freind once again

I feel so out of place
out in the cold...
if only he were here for me to hold..
I'd let him know
I need him so ..
take me..how we were before
god .. now hes gone for sure ..
He's my freind...i lost for love ..
lost for loveeeeeeeeeeee ..ohhh no ...
lost for loveeeeee..

'pant pant...bow'
I like that. Makes so much sense to me.

scaryminda15 02-23-2006 06:29 AM
scaryminda15
 
dante what did u think of the poem?

Dante'sInferno 02-23-2006 06:35 AM
It was good.:)

Angra 02-23-2006 07:27 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Posher778
your rhyme scheme is horrible.


Do i sound like simon cowell?


No. You sound like Eminem, yo.


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