i only charge $1million dollars - cash

scaryminda15
 

lol one million dollars. ill pay u in burgers. lol jk. its not that bad really posher it is just kinda like slasher i think that was what it was called about a band called slasher getting stuck in the middle of no where it was pretty good. In my opionion i would make the plot a little more interesting maybe scarier make us laugh to calm us than scare us to death it works every time. ok u might think we are all jerks for telling u what to do so u can make it into a movie and ill stand beside u because i always dream of being like stephen king. ok bye all.

erg. i don't care if you try to help me with it... but i already no this stuff... for the last time... i wrote it for a grade, i didnt care if it was good or not, lol. i'm trying to edit it some but it feels like it should just be a movie, and not a story. but i'm bored with it anyway.

k thats cool
 

that cool well good luck or whatever.

the key to good writing is revision

I've been working on a screenplay for, like, 2 months... and completely disregarding this for a while.

I liked it...I agree with Zero that the narrator got in the way at times, but overall it was pretty good. Keep it up!

Hmmm, i'm thinking of starting back up on this, no major plot holes, so that's good. It needs to be buffered though.