and it still sucks :D

fuck, its funny .. i'm going to repost it - see if we can get it going again :)

Donner's interest was growing frantically. His soft slug suddenly became a tree branch. It bang on the floor.

"Mrs. C, forget him, he can't do anything" said Gabriel. But she didnt stop.

"you're a great kid gabe but this isn't enough. We've had some laughs but you're too easy.

"What are you saying, you wanna end this?! But it just began." He said.

" I never said i would end it, just...add to it." She replied licking her lips. She dragged Gabriel across the floor with a lustful look on her face, slowly creeping towards Donner while Gabriel saw his mail box get slowly ripped from the grass...


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Most of this is actually from something me and my sick mates did at school. The thing that disturbed me most when writing it was...my name is Gabriel.