I liked that bit too!

Nice ones FC, Sorry I wasn't around to read them earlier but I did now. :)

Good to hear.

Everybody else enjoying them?

Absolutely! Sorry I was quiet today - I ended up leaving work with a migraine.

I really like em FC...like it more if i'm in it again:)


Just kidding:)

Who aren't enjoying this fast paced, action packed gruesome story? More & more awesomeness in every episodes!:)

You're getting extremely good at placing your cliffhangers. Good work.

Good chapter!

Nice episode, though I'm kinda confused about the storyline cause at one point it left off with my charactor getting introduced into it and it was all creepy and such and then bam drunken bar fun. Not complaining mind you, just... constructive criticism? Though i could be missing something.

Yeh, that was a mistake on my part. I wrote the episode last night without thinking. I had to try and recover it with this by saying that the mission would happen that day instead. Although I have thought of somethings (some which won't be revealed until the end of the series) which do fit better now. Don't worry, tomorrow, you will get your big starring role!