I sharpened my blade
Her flesh looked delicious
Soon she would be mine


I smelled the crisp air
I felt wetness on my face
The blood was drying


Her moans where perfect
She was shockingly stunning
She took her last breath


Life is beautiful
The sun beat down through the trees
On my lifeless corpse

Just to be clear, none of these are meant to go together, that last group kind of worked that way, but I promise they are all independent. Im really enjoying this.

EXCELLENT WORK
YOU ARE A WRITER FOR SURE
WHEN THE CLOCKS STRIKES NOON
I WILL ADD HAIKUS SOME MORE

Ah, old thread of mine
Brings me back fond memories
Happy to read more

Awww Shucks... Thanks.

I cut my lip bad
The blood tasted amazing
I've eaten my lip


The moon was very bright
It wrippled across the water
My last memory


Children played loudly
It lurked in the dark restroom
Jack really had to pee

I'V TAKEN HER SOUL
GROWING SO STRONG INSIDE HER
PEA SOUP ANYONE

Pooh flung at the walls,
Angry monkey with red hair,
Horror champion!

Its really dark here
My screams are not loud enough
Ill lay here and rot


I ran far away
But Ill never get away
He knows where I am


Memories of youth
Happy thoughts flash through my mind
He tightens the rope


A pool forms below
My sneakers slip in the blood
Revenge is so sweet


The noise just wont stop
Why would this happen to me
Its all falling down.

^ Great stuff, Jake!

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Love haikus, ever read 'Werewolf Haikus'? Fun book. I haven't written any myself in a while, so have some oldies from High School:

Fangs tear flesh open
Watch blood flow like a river
Watch his life be drained

Don't try to taunt me
But if you want, go ahead
I like a blood bath

Blood on an old knife
That which penetrated you
Now I'll watch you die

Stab you to the ground
The heart is a man's treasure
What'll you do, you're dead?

Die internally
Maggots eating you alive
Death comes too slowly

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All are separate.

Very nice. Im just starting to get into it. Its great for brainstorming ideas for stories. I love to write, unfortunately after finishing my first novel, I have lost the time to write. So haikus are an easy way for me to throw thoughts at paper without having to take the time to really sit and write.