Oh! How intriguing! Can't wait for the next one, Ferret! :)

Thanks Butterfly.


Come on, the rest of you readers! Let's have some more feedback!

Characters are emerging and that's good. If you keep going in this direction, you'll do well. Just keep remembering that plot should be influenced by character and not vice versa and you'll be fine. Life doesn't yank you down the street to the store, you get hungry and decide to go.

Thanks for the advice, bud. And glad you're enjoying it.

I was planning to write an episode today but I just finished writing an essay for school and I really don't feel like writing anymore. Hopefully I'll have on up tomorrow.

Good episode ferret. I hope you feel better soon.

Thanks for the feedback an the good thoughts, Dante.

I like the character development there, Ferret. Get better soon...so you can write more! :p

I'll do my best! :D

Ferret to readers. Come in. Over.