FilmFan13
01-01-2016, 12:01 PM
Hey guys, I posted my first short film here recently and figured Id post my 2nd short film which I just finished. It's called Mary Says Goodnight. I hope some people will check it out.
http://youtu.be/QvIpm9Shfrg
Toddallthingshorror
01-01-2016, 02:27 PM
Not a bad 2nd offering
Pros
Liked the B&W
Lighting was consistent
Actress did a good job
Cons
Run time
Some scenes went on a bit too long (stirring glass, pouring liquor, counting pills etc)
Some of the shots were shadowy
The payoff didnt have any umpf to it
I think when you have a slow buildup like this film you have to have a payoff worth the run time.
Keep it going, I look forward to more.