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Sculpt
02-08-2014, 02:19 PM
This is the "Continue The Story..." thread.

Rules:


Read the story from where you left off, so you're familiar with the continuity.
Using the Reply button (not Quote), add ONE sentence to further the story. You may add two short sentences if necessary.
Please, no obscenity.
Write whatever you like: horror, humor, romance, dialogue, narration, change narrative modes (1st, 2nd, 3rd person), simple or lavish description, corny or professional, etc.
It's for fun.

Next post begins the story...

Sculpt
02-08-2014, 02:20 PM
As I turned to see the sun extinguished behind the ridge, feeling the water freeze around my boots, I realized I wasn't going anywhere.

The Villain
02-08-2014, 10:13 PM
There was nowhere to go. The creature was coming for me and would be here soon.

Sculpt
02-12-2014, 10:45 PM
I had one flare, one shot, one chance... but regardless, one long night ahead of me.

cheebacheeba
02-13-2014, 01:33 AM
I turned to see the creature before me, it had bellybuttons where the eyes should be and broken chalk for teeth.

The Villain
02-13-2014, 02:49 AM
I tried to scream but all that came out was a whimper. My plan and my courage were all forgotten at the sight of the abomination.

cheebacheeba
02-13-2014, 05:10 AM
I noticed the lint in his eyeballs as he leaned in, opening his mouth and biting my face...the points of contact turning to red patches of chalk

The Villain
02-13-2014, 06:54 AM
But just before the monster could finish the deed and end my life, my body found the ability to move again.

Sculpt
02-13-2014, 12:17 PM
It had mouth opened, it leaned back, revealing its horror. Its bellybuttons were outties, looking like crab eyes, its scream like chalk scrapping a blackboard!

cheebacheeba
02-17-2014, 04:32 AM
Then I had a thought...I grabbed the creatures hand, sure enough it crumbled like chalk...I pulled it out and started to urinate on the creature, melting the chalk away with all my urinary force.

Sculpt
02-18-2014, 08:36 PM
Although calcium carbonate is poorly soluble in water, the creature was eaten away, along with the ice around my boots.

cheebacheeba
02-19-2014, 01:04 AM
(must have been the salt content, coupled with the heat and sheer force)
...and then, as I looked into it's dying eye-buttons, I gazed upon my reflection...

Sculpt
02-20-2014, 11:52 AM
I looked like I was free, and about to die of hypothermia.

cheebacheeba
02-21-2014, 05:47 AM
...and then I died.
Of hypothermia.

Though while most stories start at the beginning, this one kicked off a the end.

Sculpt
02-22-2014, 06:45 PM
Then the medium, Madame Helena, convulsed as she spoke the last words of the man who had froze. This was my chance to exact retribution on the woman who murdered my daughter!

The Bloofer Lady
03-24-2014, 08:52 AM
She was driven over the edge by Madame H telling her how much her newly passed fiance missed her from the other side. She then took her own shattered life!

totem
03-25-2014, 07:02 AM
Alas the blade she used - of Madam Helena's coven - was cursed: it does not end life for those using it on themselves. Her eyes now closed, soon she would know.

The Bloofer Lady
03-26-2014, 02:17 AM
But what would she know? Anguish at not succeeding or relief...

totem
03-26-2014, 06:15 AM
As curiosity gave way to dread, she stood at the Madame's command: a fresh undead minion of Helena's wickedness.

The Bloofer Lady
03-26-2014, 04:17 PM
And screaming silently in torment, the spirit of her dead fiance Ethan looked on. But when you are dead...you KNOW things.

The Bloofer Lady
04-02-2014, 05:47 PM
Like the best burger joint in town and who it was that let the dogs out...

The Bloofer Lady
04-03-2014, 09:04 AM
and how to contact Theresa Caputo personally....

Sculpt
04-24-2014, 12:50 PM
For Ethan knew that Theresa Caputo, though she hated hamburgers, she was able to tell me that Madame Helena turned my daughter into a Coven Zombie seamstress, making the most repulsive hoodie robs this side of Hades. One way or another, the Madame will tell me how to free her.

The Bloofer Lady
04-26-2014, 06:29 AM
And if not...my skills as an ex-Navy Seal and pro-wrestler (tee-hee) would serve me well infiltrating the garment factory of the Undead!!!!

Sculpt
04-29-2014, 11:04 PM
So I looked the Madame deep into her eyes and said...

The Bloofer Lady
05-02-2014, 09:30 AM
"See anything you like?". She looked momentarily confused but quickly regained her composure.

Sculpt
05-02-2014, 10:03 PM
She saw something she liked: my daughter's eyes. And now she wanted mine, and the hook was set.

The Bloofer Lady
05-03-2014, 07:04 AM
I could be as charming as Mick Dundee(my hero) when needed and I poured on the sunshine. Too bad this Madame couldn't predict the crazy train that was heading right for her!!!!!!

Sculpt
05-03-2014, 03:48 PM
The Crazy Train was my powerful mental projection, a freight train into her psyche.

The Bloofer Lady
05-03-2014, 04:40 PM
I am, of course, talking about my extensive military training in psychic weaponry. The movie "The Men who Stare at Goats", (which I almost starred in as an extra) was no fairytale.

Sculpt
05-04-2014, 11:24 AM
Madame Helena's eyes started to boogle, and her lips mumbled; and I said, "Where is Theresa Caputo?"

The Bloofer Lady
05-04-2014, 01:12 PM
Jean Claude Van DAMN....why did I ask her that?? (tee-hee)

Sculpt
05-06-2014, 11:31 PM
Just as I saw my body complete a round house kick to her head!

The Bloofer Lady
05-07-2014, 03:54 PM
That sea hag went down faster than Monica Lewinsky but it gave me a New York minute to inject her with sodium pentathol(which I'm pretty sure is the stuff that will render her unable to lie).

Sculpt
05-07-2014, 08:51 PM
Let's see... where should we begin?

The Bloofer Lady
05-09-2014, 03:19 AM
I bent down to roll her over when suddenly her doorbell chimed!! It was shrill and the Madame started to stir...

Sculpt
05-15-2014, 09:35 PM
Who could it be at this hour! The session I paid for was for the entire evening!

The Bloofer Lady
05-16-2014, 03:56 PM
Its true, this was unexpected, but there isn't one thing on God's green earth that I can't handle. I'm basically a human "Terminator"(which I almost starred in as an extra).

Sculpt
05-16-2014, 06:47 PM
I stuffed Madame Hellena into a closet, and approached the door.

The Bloofer Lady
05-17-2014, 07:57 AM
The caller began pounding on the door as I peered through the peephole. I saw the frantic face of my ex-wife, Nadine!!!!!!!

Sculpt
05-18-2014, 02:47 PM
I swung open the door and yanked her in! I seethed hushly through my teeth, "Nadine! What are you doing here?!"

The Bloofer Lady
05-18-2014, 06:09 PM
She collapsed in my arms, her face shiny with tears. " Jennifer's missing and this is the last place she was seen...to see a medium about contacting poor Ethan!"

Sculpt
05-20-2014, 08:32 PM
"I've got something to show you, Nadine!"

The Bloofer Lady
05-21-2014, 09:20 AM
Somehow, with Nadine by my side I felt more confident we would soon have our daughter back. I threw open the closet door just on time to reveal the Madame trying to escape through a secret passageway!!!!!

The Bloofer Lady
05-29-2014, 09:50 AM
EPILOGUE

That secret passageway led to the zombie sweatshop my daughter was being held captive in. With a little persuasion(wink), I managed to convince the Madame to counteract the black magic she had worked on Jen. After notifying the authorities, I grabbed my family and fled. The line of work I'm in makes me a wanted man wherever I go, kind of like David Banner in the tv series "The Incredible Hulk"(where I once worked as a stand in for Lou Ferrigno)
Nadine and I are getting back together to help Jen through the grieving process of losing Ethan. What happened to the Madame you ask?(or maybe you didn't). I don't know..she evaded capture by the police. She's still out there...somewhere.

Thanks to Totem and Sculpt!

Sculpt
05-30-2014, 04:47 PM
Great Epi!

The Bloofer Lady
06-01-2014, 04:46 AM
Great Epi!

Thanks! I had a lot if fun with this. ::cool::

MichaelMyers
02-26-2015, 11:54 AM
How bout a new one?

Sculpt
02-28-2015, 02:03 AM
How bout a new one?
Absolutely!

Why dont you start us off in a new thread? Maybe give it a name followed by "Continue the story...". You can check out & cut and paste the rules/instructions from my OP (original post).

tfantasy
03-04-2015, 08:06 AM
Is there another thread, I want to get in on it!!

I was majorly cracking up when I read this entire thread ::stick out tongue::

anglewitch
03-05-2015, 01:21 PM
Damn it, wish I was here for the continue the story. Start another one please. If you wont I will.

tfantasy
03-07-2015, 11:43 AM
Go for it, I will get in on the fun!!

anglewitch
03-07-2015, 12:46 PM
Go for it, I will get in on the fun!!

Okay here goes nothin.


The Trees Can See.

"My name Timothy Chaplin, I am a explorer from America. I always thought an explorer has nothing to fear from the woodlands. I was wrong. You see I have been cursed to wander the wilderness. I am now but a lost soul seeking freedom from the things that live in the woods. Trees."
My story begins on an investigation on the disappearances of people who went into these woods. These woods were called Normans Woods. Norman was a suppose to be a warlock that worshiped trees. It was in those woods where he disappeared. He was not the only one unfortunately.

The Bloofer Lady
03-08-2015, 12:15 PM
Belongings of previous "wanderers" were strewn amongst the trees to wait forever to be claimed.

Sculpt
03-09-2015, 12:08 PM
Angelwitch, you should really start a new thread for the new story, (just cut and paste what you have), otherwise, it will be a hassle for others to find what page-and-post starts the new story.