Homemade horror film

[KANEandDYLAN]

This is our homemade horror film
www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6YuYVKCbDA

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It's a decent effort. Your framing is off on a number of shots- you cut off the top of the boy's head, etc. I didn't really "jump" at any of the moments, but it's a solid experiment. Keep working.