Any Lyricists Here?

[Arioch]

How about our lyric/poetry writers on here huh? Anyone got some lyrics to share?

I'll go first, from a new song im workin on:

Will you look where we're headed,
Christ, look where we've been.
Hold your flag up high, in pride, and
Bury our children.



Thats probably gonna be the chorus (think "wish you were here") anywho, anyone else got anything to contribute?

[AmarylandPsycho]

Heres some

Will you come with me my darling
Flying high were in the clear
Always dreaming of your smile
walk the night with me and hold me (tight)harmony
Through it all youve always been there
Now I know that we have made it
will you come with me my darling
walk the night with me and hold me tight.
Walk the night with me and hold me tight.
Walk the night with me and hold me tight
As we find our way together
Ill be thinking always of you
tell me that you never leave me
take my hand and let me lead you
will you come with me my darling
walk the night with me and hold me tight.
walk the night with me and hold me tight
walk the night with me and hold me tight.


What do you think?

[Arioch]

Nice job, i like the harmony note there, helped me picture it alot more like a song....it IS a song right?...id like to get some mp3 action on it if it is....pretty nice little love ballad ya got there Mr.psycho....

Alright since its just you and me on this site writing lyrics apparently, ill go with a love ballad to match ya....

One Lost Moment

Verse1
Too broken,
To even try,
Pretend this love,
is a lie.
Transcend the pain we both knew
*wispered* (everytime.....i close my eyes...)

I Still See You
Bridge -- (waltz)
See you dance...
I still see you...
See you dance...

Verse 2
Somehow we,
Got lost at sea.
Desperatly close
to the shore.
Abandonded our ship premature.
*wispered (everytime.....i close my eyes....)

I Still See Your...
Bridge2--(waltz)
Shadow.
Dance across.....this.....wall.
Something so quaint and tivial's
what i miss...most...of all.

Chorus - Heavy guitar
I'll never stop believing in you...
I'll never stop believing in you...
Through all the shit you put me through,
I'll never stop believing in you...

Outro
For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment........there was nothing i wouldn't do.

For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment.........there was nothing i couldn't do......for you.




Well? whatcha think?

[hellfire1]

snif... snif...



sorry what was the question ? :p



seriously though... very beautiful you guys.

[Arioch]

snif... snif...



sorry what was the question ?



seriously though... very beautiful you guys.

Heh....he started it!!with his whole love song there....i can love with the best of them ya know.....BETTER some would say....:p

No seriously, thanks alot Hellfire....i wish we could get some more action in this thread tho.....no lyricists here:(

[hellfire1]

i've been writing since i was a kid but i don't consider myself a lyricist... just screwing around, writing what comes into my head... not going to post that shit here to get the hell flamed outta me :D :p and i'm probably not alone on this !


so kudos to you guys for daring to dare ! lol

[Arioch]

i've been writing since i was a kid but i don't consider myself a lyricist... just screwing around, writing what comes into my head... not going to post that shit here to get the hell flamed outta me and i'm probably not alone on this !


so kudos to you guys for daring to dare ! lol

Hey i dont think you should worry about getting flammed hellfirst, just look how few people are actually veiwing this thread, let alone responding......but i can understand your hesitation, still it would be nice to see some of your stuff...

[Arioch]

Just bumping this thread for any members who dont suck and look in the music forum:p...

[hellfire1]

ok arioch, since you're so set on keeping this thread alive ( lol ), here's a little something i thought of :

hey loneliness
step through my door
i've tasted you
i'm ready for a little more

hey lost highway
let's go for a ride
i'm free for anything
yeah, i'm ready to slide

[Arioch]

Hey i like it Hellfire....nice personification given to the highway and loneliness....very classy....goodform...

[hellfire1]

damn ex !! lol
was thinking of it as a song, but i can't write music for the life of me. i always wonder how musicians come up with such great melodies.

[Arioch]

damn ex !! lol
was thinking of it as a song, but i can't write music for the life of me. i always wonder how musicians come up with such great melodies.

For me i almost always come up with the melody first, then try to find lyrics that fit.....if i try the other way around its much, much harder....

Do you play any instruments HF?

[hellfire1]

what's hard about melody, for me anyway, is trying to come up with something original. i almost always have a melody i've already heard in mind when i think of lyrics.

i play, or rather played the... eh hem... flute. shut up !
i am now in the process of learning how to play the drums. :o like... so much cooler :p

[Arioch]

play, or rather played the... eh hem... flute. shut up !
i am now in the process of learning how to play the drums. like... so much cooler

LMAO!! ya much cooler...

[hellfire1]

:o

you mean to tell me that you were the cool little kid in music class who went directly into playing the guitar ?? i doubt it ! :p

[Arioch]

you mean to tell me that you were the cool little kid in music class who went directly into playing the guitar ?? i doubt it !

Actually, i always hated music class....i loved art and thought id be an artist....one of the things i remember most vividly from elementary school was walking to music class saying "God, i hate music class, why do i even need this anyway....its not like im gonna be a musician or anything!!"

:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o

[hellfire1]

LMAO !!!!!!! funny shit !!

[friday13thfan]

Zombie outbreak
By The Psychos

Every bodies running scared
I dont know if I should care
Im pulling on my hair
Then theres that sound
The dead are rising from the ground
Because its a

(Chorus)
Zombie outbreak
I dont know how much I can take
Theyre all around
I make no sound

Lock the door behind you
What can you do?
The dead are walking everywhere
Dont even dare

(Chorus)

What can I do?
What can I do?
What can I do?!!!!
Im running fast as I can
Theyre around the bend
This is the end
There is no more sound


that was one i just wrote so what do you guys think

[Lucid Dreams]

something i did a while ago...kinda sux

i'm hiding on the surface with nothing behind my purpose
i'm running in the face of battle with no war in mind
the tempurtures rising, the sun in the sky burns
the brightness of the glares is enough to make my stomach turn
i'm mentally stable, although i'm told to be crazy
i'm not broken, i just don't work right
with the right frame of mind, i could live on this earth
in the face of the battle of geneisis
theres no where to run, no where to hide, it's hard enough to take a piss
my sweats dripping down my face like the blood on my head
i can't think, or remember the last time i was fed
the cold resistance of the enemy wears me down
i'm not giving up till i've killed every fucker

[Arioch]

Nice stuff guys....you should get some more on here....nice to have some writers FINALLY chiming in on this thread...

[friday13thfan]

another one i did back when i liked rap but now i hate the stuff

Flaming Tree
By the Psychos

It’s 2:59 going on 3:00
I’m just chilling with my homies in a tree
All of sudden a wicked bolt of lighting strikes
Now just plain bites
I fall fall fall
Like a huge billiard ball
I land on a surface of fire and leaves
Looking up I see
A flaming tree
Looking down on me
I say

Chorus:
Burn baby burn
I want to see leafs turn black
Burn baby burn
I think this is giving me a heart attack
Burn baby burn
Flames are dancing
Looking down at me

I grab some gasoline because I want more
My arms are feeling sore
So I let it all pour out
Then light a match
Watch the magic start


it is not very good but i made it when i was 10 4 years ago so what does every one think