Here is my horror movie, any one else made one?

[tonakai82]

Hi all, just joined this forum, made my first horror movie and thought this might be a place to get input. What do you think? is it creepy or just dull?

Either search on y-tube:
"1 minute horror movie: 知らぬが仏" or clickhttp://youtu.be/CzUZHnCEz5E

I would love your constructive input what works(if any) and what doesn't work. If any one else made some horror footage would love to see some links.. feel free to PM me:) or post your own material.

cheers,
Little Boo

[neverending]

The shots are all well done, but I don't much of a sense of the narrative, if there is one.

[tonakai82]

Good point, thanks for the input. Im glad you like the shots. Yea the red thread is missing, maybe I should have added some text in the beginning to set the scene or link the episodes.

I was trying to make an unpredictable WTF feeling if you know what I mean.
Link bathroom to some other dark world. But after adjusting over and over again Im becoming blind for what works and what doesnt.

Forgot to ad i my previous post that this should be watched at full screen and with volume for best effect.