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[Armada Volya]

I wrote a short, dark fantasy, story and am getting ready to publish it. I posted it on my site for free for anyone who wants to read it. Would love to hear any advise on it if you think I need to change anything.

http://undercandlelight.weebly.com/2/post/2012/10/haunting-a-tale-of-friendship.html