Willowfang
05-27-2012, 05:47 PM
I wrote this one for the Spring contest last year over on BD, came in 2nd place with this one. I wrote it some time after the Tsunami in Japan. The theme I used for this story was Atomic Horror. Please feel free to comment.
Jörmungandr
The news helicopter hovered over the nuclear reactor at what the pilot felt should be a safe distance. That didn't stop the reporter from constantly urging him to fly closer. And it's not as if they could see things any better unless they got a hell of a lot closer. There was obviously lots of damage and debris everywhere. Cars, trees, mud, a long twisted train could even be seen amid the wreckage.
He inched a little closer, hoping to appease the reporter as she rambled on about how “tragic” her big break was. He hoped the reactor would be fine, but it was clearly damaged, the walls of the buildings were cracked, steam leaked from many of the pipes, flooding all over, and the water was still shifting the train around. Except it wasn't shifting any of the other stuff that got washed up around here he thought as he scanned the area.
He started listening for the reporter to pause so he could point the train out.
“Down below you can see the extensive damage to the facility, but there's no signs that reactor is in any immediate danger, how long it stays that way remains to be seen though. The grounds here are flooded, there are cars, trees, the roof of a house and what looks like a train twisted up around one of the reactors, can you get a better shot of the train there, Kira?
She pointed to head of the train and tapped me on the shoulder, obviously wanting me to get closer. I moved in a little and swung around for a better shot. But from this angle it was beginning to look less like a train and more like... a whale? I could see teeth, and an large eye socket, too big for any whale.
“It looks like there's a whale tangled up in the wreckage. Are you getting this? Oh my god!!! Is it still alive, I can see the eye moving, it's mouth is gasping for breath. You can see it's fangs, it's tongue hanging out as it tries to breath.
Kira then spoke up. That was gonna get him in trouble I thought, especially with this reporter. You never want to step on her commentaries. “Whales don't have fangs, or long, thin tongues for that matter.”
The reporter didn't seem to notice his interruption as she now noticed the same thing we were all looking at. Whatever it was, it was bigger than most whales and something far different. As I followed the body back from the head, this thing went hundreds of yards back towards the sea. I suddenly heard her scream as I looked back out the front of the helicopter and there was the thing's mouth right in front of......
* * *
Takahashi was overseeing the clearing of debris from a major roadway leading in to the tsunami devastated area when he was waved over by his secretary, Yuna Kon, to come take a call as she held up the radio headset linked to the network they were using to coordinate the rescue and relief efforts.
“Hello, Takahashi here,” he said as he settled the headset over his ears.
“How far are you from the reactor, do you have it in sight?”
“No, we're about six miles away still, and a few hills and bends between us.”
“How fast can you get someone there? Never mind clearing everything, I mean just to get a visual on the site.”
“Dunno, depends on the debris between here and there. If it was just a matter of climbing around over some of it, maybe two hours, but if we had no choice but to cut through, there's no telling. Who is this anyway, you never said?” Takahashi asked as he considered what he felt were rather odd questions.
“I'm Major Kurosaki with the SDF assigned to overseeing assistance to the reactor. We need a visual report on the nuclear facility as soon as possible. We also need to know if there's any sign of a news helicopter that has also disappeared in the area. I need you to get someone there right away. Contact me on this channel the second you have anything to report.”
Takahashi thought it was an odd request as he handed the headset back to Kon. He was already clearing the road as fast as he could, why not just send an SDF helicopter to get a visual? Could radiation levels be so bad as to prevent a helicopter from getting close enough? He didn't know what conditions lay on the road ahead, but he told two of his men to start suiting up try walking to the reactor as soon as they could get around the pile of debris they were currently working on and report back by radio.
* * *
Captain Thomas was going over his orders once again. He'd been told to set sail for Japan at once, no reason as to why or what to do when he got there, not yet anyway. So the aircraft carrier, USS Theodore Roosevelt, was now under way to Japan with an ETA of almost sixteen hours. He wasn't worried as such, he'd known about the recent tsunami and figured his mission would be related, but why nothing more as of yet, and what exactly did anyone expect a carrier to do that other ships could do far better as far as helping any survivors?
* * *
Sometime later, Takahashi saw Kon calling him urgently as she waved the headset at him. He hurried over, wondering if it would be his men, having made it to the reactor, or Major Kurosaki looking for a status report.
“Takahashi here,” he spoke into the mouth piece.
“I'm here at the end of the road, the reactor is gone,” Hanaka responded, he really didn't know what else to say.
“How bad is it, are you picking up any radiation?”
“No sir, no radiation. And by gone I mean gone, there's no reactor, no buildings, no rubble, ruins, or even a sign of them. It's as if a giant hand just scooped it all up. There's just an empty field of dirt here, sir.”
“Say that again? Are you claiming that where the reactor is supposed to be there's just an empty field and no sign of any radiation or the news copter?” Takahashi didn't think it was possible, but thought he should at least say what he thought he heard so Hanaka could either confirm or deny it.
“That's right, sir,” Hanaka said nervously. He could hardly believe it himself, and figured he wouldn't be believed until several more people got here to look at the same empty field he was seeing right now.
“Hanaka, are you sure that's the report you want to give right now? We'll be up there ourselves before long you know.
“Yes, sir, I confirm the report I've already given.”
“Okay then. While we're still on the radio, I want you to completely check over your Geiger counter and rescan for radiation, please confirm.”
“Confirmed, sir. Checking the detector over and will rescan. Give me a minute.”
Takahashi stayed on the radio for a few minutes to let Hanaka recheck. When he came back, his story was the same, no radiation present. He'd have to call and give Major Kurosaki the report he just heard, but he saw no reason for the major to believe the story any more than he did as he told the radio operator to get the major on the line.
* * *
Jörmungandr
The news helicopter hovered over the nuclear reactor at what the pilot felt should be a safe distance. That didn't stop the reporter from constantly urging him to fly closer. And it's not as if they could see things any better unless they got a hell of a lot closer. There was obviously lots of damage and debris everywhere. Cars, trees, mud, a long twisted train could even be seen amid the wreckage.
He inched a little closer, hoping to appease the reporter as she rambled on about how “tragic” her big break was. He hoped the reactor would be fine, but it was clearly damaged, the walls of the buildings were cracked, steam leaked from many of the pipes, flooding all over, and the water was still shifting the train around. Except it wasn't shifting any of the other stuff that got washed up around here he thought as he scanned the area.
He started listening for the reporter to pause so he could point the train out.
“Down below you can see the extensive damage to the facility, but there's no signs that reactor is in any immediate danger, how long it stays that way remains to be seen though. The grounds here are flooded, there are cars, trees, the roof of a house and what looks like a train twisted up around one of the reactors, can you get a better shot of the train there, Kira?
She pointed to head of the train and tapped me on the shoulder, obviously wanting me to get closer. I moved in a little and swung around for a better shot. But from this angle it was beginning to look less like a train and more like... a whale? I could see teeth, and an large eye socket, too big for any whale.
“It looks like there's a whale tangled up in the wreckage. Are you getting this? Oh my god!!! Is it still alive, I can see the eye moving, it's mouth is gasping for breath. You can see it's fangs, it's tongue hanging out as it tries to breath.
Kira then spoke up. That was gonna get him in trouble I thought, especially with this reporter. You never want to step on her commentaries. “Whales don't have fangs, or long, thin tongues for that matter.”
The reporter didn't seem to notice his interruption as she now noticed the same thing we were all looking at. Whatever it was, it was bigger than most whales and something far different. As I followed the body back from the head, this thing went hundreds of yards back towards the sea. I suddenly heard her scream as I looked back out the front of the helicopter and there was the thing's mouth right in front of......
* * *
Takahashi was overseeing the clearing of debris from a major roadway leading in to the tsunami devastated area when he was waved over by his secretary, Yuna Kon, to come take a call as she held up the radio headset linked to the network they were using to coordinate the rescue and relief efforts.
“Hello, Takahashi here,” he said as he settled the headset over his ears.
“How far are you from the reactor, do you have it in sight?”
“No, we're about six miles away still, and a few hills and bends between us.”
“How fast can you get someone there? Never mind clearing everything, I mean just to get a visual on the site.”
“Dunno, depends on the debris between here and there. If it was just a matter of climbing around over some of it, maybe two hours, but if we had no choice but to cut through, there's no telling. Who is this anyway, you never said?” Takahashi asked as he considered what he felt were rather odd questions.
“I'm Major Kurosaki with the SDF assigned to overseeing assistance to the reactor. We need a visual report on the nuclear facility as soon as possible. We also need to know if there's any sign of a news helicopter that has also disappeared in the area. I need you to get someone there right away. Contact me on this channel the second you have anything to report.”
Takahashi thought it was an odd request as he handed the headset back to Kon. He was already clearing the road as fast as he could, why not just send an SDF helicopter to get a visual? Could radiation levels be so bad as to prevent a helicopter from getting close enough? He didn't know what conditions lay on the road ahead, but he told two of his men to start suiting up try walking to the reactor as soon as they could get around the pile of debris they were currently working on and report back by radio.
* * *
Captain Thomas was going over his orders once again. He'd been told to set sail for Japan at once, no reason as to why or what to do when he got there, not yet anyway. So the aircraft carrier, USS Theodore Roosevelt, was now under way to Japan with an ETA of almost sixteen hours. He wasn't worried as such, he'd known about the recent tsunami and figured his mission would be related, but why nothing more as of yet, and what exactly did anyone expect a carrier to do that other ships could do far better as far as helping any survivors?
* * *
Sometime later, Takahashi saw Kon calling him urgently as she waved the headset at him. He hurried over, wondering if it would be his men, having made it to the reactor, or Major Kurosaki looking for a status report.
“Takahashi here,” he spoke into the mouth piece.
“I'm here at the end of the road, the reactor is gone,” Hanaka responded, he really didn't know what else to say.
“How bad is it, are you picking up any radiation?”
“No sir, no radiation. And by gone I mean gone, there's no reactor, no buildings, no rubble, ruins, or even a sign of them. It's as if a giant hand just scooped it all up. There's just an empty field of dirt here, sir.”
“Say that again? Are you claiming that where the reactor is supposed to be there's just an empty field and no sign of any radiation or the news copter?” Takahashi didn't think it was possible, but thought he should at least say what he thought he heard so Hanaka could either confirm or deny it.
“That's right, sir,” Hanaka said nervously. He could hardly believe it himself, and figured he wouldn't be believed until several more people got here to look at the same empty field he was seeing right now.
“Hanaka, are you sure that's the report you want to give right now? We'll be up there ourselves before long you know.
“Yes, sir, I confirm the report I've already given.”
“Okay then. While we're still on the radio, I want you to completely check over your Geiger counter and rescan for radiation, please confirm.”
“Confirmed, sir. Checking the detector over and will rescan. Give me a minute.”
Takahashi stayed on the radio for a few minutes to let Hanaka recheck. When he came back, his story was the same, no radiation present. He'd have to call and give Major Kurosaki the report he just heard, but he saw no reason for the major to believe the story any more than he did as he told the radio operator to get the major on the line.
* * *