new some help...

[gem177]

hey I am currently making my first horror film and am new to the whole thing of building an audience etc.
so apologies if my posting here pisses anyone off! I need to talk to horror fans to make sure I
deliver the kind of film you'd want to see.
Its a sexy horror on a boat in the Caribbean with brutal killings and a big old twist. Would any of you
mind checking out my site and giving me some feedback?
Thank you

http://www.indiegogo.com/PARTY-BOAT?

[newb]

It's kind of hard to give you feedback without at least a trailer to look at.

[Toadliquor]

I sort of dig the premise, but your synopsis could tease the story a little more.

Also, you might want to change your Impact statement. It shouldn't focus on you and the cast furthering your careers. While I'm sure that is one of your goals, a potential investor wouldn't care in the least. It should be more focused on getting the movie to the screen/dvd, or returning a profit.

[CannibalHolocaust]

sounds like a good idea...