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troykirby
04-20-2011, 12:45 PM
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Two grave robbers discover too late that what lurks beneath the surface of a casket is not something they should have disturbed.

Click here (http://www.wattpad.com/1292861-what-sits-at-the-bottom-of-plot-105) to read it!

bobbyshane
04-20-2011, 07:10 PM
Good Charactarization and the concept is interesting but you might want to do some proof reading over it and polish it up some. Especially that last page. Good job.

BookZombie
04-22-2011, 08:11 AM
I could not get into the site where your story is posted, do you have it posted anywhere else?