View Full Version : What's going on outside haiku
Doc Faustus
04-28-2009, 06:25 PM
Porchlight turns back on
It is motion sensitive
Awesome! Two bunnies!
neverending
04-28-2009, 07:00 PM
Cherry blossoms wave
Traffic slows, darkness becomes
A chill in the air
neverending
04-28-2009, 07:02 PM
BTW Doc- yours doesn't fit. It's is one syllable (sp).
cheebacheeba
04-28-2009, 07:04 PM
birds incessant chirps
sun radiates through the clouds
overcast yet bright
ferretchucker
04-29-2009, 07:46 AM
Clouds begin to form,
The Sun is being shut out,
Wind rustles the leaves.
bloody_ribcut
04-29-2009, 08:27 AM
wind, dirt, trees, and bees..
cats, dogs, flea's, fiends, crack, and weeds..
sea's, d's, pee's, and speeds.
Papillon Noir
04-29-2009, 09:07 AM
cooler out today
the raindrops fall, no more sun
to our deep regret
Roderick Usher
04-29-2009, 09:54 AM
hot chick moving in
across the hall from my place
lusting through window
Marley's Ghost
04-29-2009, 10:29 AM
Dog Shits On My Lawn
Neighbor Does Not Leash The Dog
I Shall Kill The Fuck
Thunder Rumbles Low
Rain Washes Blood From My Hands
Neighbor Is No More
ferretchucker
04-29-2009, 10:46 AM
The sky is now clear!
What a nice development,
Spring is nearly here.
neverending
04-29-2009, 04:44 PM
Pink blossom carpet
Low grey clouds, Sun peeks
Man in laundry waits
bloody_ribcut
04-29-2009, 05:29 PM
darkness and bass thumps
drive bys and clouds of weed linger
cats in the garbage
Elvis_Christ
04-29-2009, 06:50 PM
How do Haikus work again?
neverending
04-29-2009, 06:55 PM
5
7
5
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weekend is coming
i'm getting really thirsty
i need a cold beer
fortunato
04-29-2009, 08:11 PM
A reply to Newb's haiku:
I had a few beers
On this lovely spring evening
I'm buzzed and tired
scouse mac
04-30-2009, 04:23 AM
Just got home from work
Sun hiding behind dark clouds
Drinking tea, I wait
Papillon Noir
04-30-2009, 05:08 AM
I sit at work now
In my cube, flourescent lights
Dim down my spirit
neverending
04-30-2009, 05:54 AM
I sit at work now
In my cube, flourescent lights
Dim down my spirit
But what's happening OUTSIDE?
Papillon Noir
04-30-2009, 06:00 AM
But what's happening OUTSIDE?
There are no windows
In my cube, only blank walls
There is no outside
bloody_ribcut
04-30-2009, 06:13 AM
airplanes fly over
experimenting chemtrails
cardinal whistles
ferretchucker
04-30-2009, 09:04 AM
Birds won't stop Screeching,
The Sun is melting my eyes,
Flies aim for my mouth.
Rayne
04-30-2009, 09:14 AM
Rain storms that I love
Murdering my internet
Bittersweet trade-off
Rayne
04-30-2009, 09:19 AM
Birds won't stop Screeching,
The Sun is melting my eyes,
Flies aim for my mouth.
That was extremely good...I can actually feel that...Ugh, I hate the stupid sun...
ferretchucker
04-30-2009, 09:26 AM
That was extremely good...I can actually feel that...Ugh, I hate the stupid sun...
Me too. And the wasps haven't started coming yet but they will. This is why I don't like Summer.