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Vodstok
02-02-2004, 09:23 AM
Incase anyone is interested, i have posted the prelude to a dark fantasy story on my site here:

http://www.vodstok.net/gloom/

let me know what you think of the openeing. there is a lot planned for this, and the more feedback i get, the faster it will be done, so let me know what you think . :)

Vodstok
02-11-2004, 06:30 AM
Awww, c'mon. Don't make me beg. If you hate it, I'll refund your money ;)

sleepaway
02-12-2004, 01:33 AM
I really liked it. Made me want to read more so I guess it's working so far. It's very very H.G. Wells, which is a good thing!

Vodstok
02-12-2004, 04:08 AM
cool, thanks :). It's a work in progress, I'm hoping to add new chapters every couple of weeks. :)

sleepaway
02-13-2004, 03:41 AM
Originally posted by Vodstok
cool, thanks :). It's a work in progress, I'm hoping to add new chapters every couple of weeks. :)

Cool, post a link here when you update it as I'd love to read more.

Vodstok
03-12-2004, 07:35 PM
Im a dork , i know. Humor me and read it.




Please.:)

William
03-13-2004, 10:51 AM
Very sci-fi-ish. I like it, can't wait to read the other chapters and to see what the graphics look like. Nice imagery and use of words as well.

radio667
03-13-2004, 05:37 PM
I Like It :D not Perfect yet ..but your getting there ...Reminds me a bit of HP LOVECRAFT - Which is a Very Good Thing ;) !!

Vodstok
03-13-2004, 09:13 PM
lovecraft? you flatte rme. He is the only "horror" i ever really read. Thanks :) I actually wenty for his level of description when writing it so you have no idea how good a compliment that is :D

radio667
03-14-2004, 07:59 AM
:D I can't wait to read the next Chapter .

Vodstok
03-29-2004, 08:42 AM
Chapter one will be in place by wednesday, just fyi

last bad move
03-29-2004, 09:37 AM
wow pretty cool i cant wait for the next chapter

radio667
03-29-2004, 03:41 PM
Very Cool :) !!