HDC : Darkness and Daggers

[ferretchucker]

Some of you may remember that a while ago I did "Livin' it HDC : The Horror.com Soap". It lasted a few months and I did a few "episodes" each week. A few members here got interested in it. Anyway, I decided instead of doing another HDC the Movie with only one plot, I'd do the soap again. Then I thought harder and decided that it had progressed quite far and so it may be hard for any new members to pick it up.

So that's when I decided to do another soap. I was thinking of how to differentiate it from the old one. That's when it hit me. A few hundred years is pretty different. So, this "soap" is going to be set around the middle ages. I was bound by the laws of reality with the old one. This one I can have some more fun. Magic, Dragons, Sword fights etc.

Don't expect it to be too realistic. I'm not a historian so things from different era's may slip in. But who cares.

So. Anybody want to be in it?

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[Dante'sInferno]

I'll be in it.Can my name be Jeremiah Dante?

[ferretchucker]

Sure. Whatever floats your boat.

[crabapple]

Okay........ can I be Nathaniel Crab, who owns the apple orchard on the hill that some say is haunted by a glowing cyclops octopus?

[VampiricClown]

I'm in....

[massacre man]

I want to kill an ogre.

[alkytrio666]

Okay........ can I be Nathaniel Crab, who owns the apple orchard on the hill that some say is haunted by a glowing cyclops octopus?
I'll be the cyclops octopus.

[Freak]

i'm in and I wanna be some village Freak that terrorizes people.

[_____V_____]

Count me in.

Character description - Smartass "Ash" type medieval knight, with a streak of vigilantism...yet the ultimate savior who goes unnoticed. :cool:

[GorePhobia]

I'll be in it also.

Make me whatever you'd like to make me.

[The_Return]

I'm in for sure - just so long as I get to be evil.

[Despare]

I'll be in it. I'd like to be a priest who's moved up in the ranks and is making quite a bit of money of the people who follow him so, even though he's an agnostic now, he continues to do his job (with less vigor than when he started and was a Christian obviously) just to rip off the peasants and make mad cash.

[fortunato]

count me in, too.

i'd like to be evil, and wear a mask.

[massacre man]

Count me in.

Character description - Smartass "Ash" type medieval knight, with a streak of vigilantism...yet the ultimate savior who goes unnoticed. :cool:

I want to be the foul-mouthed asshole who takes credit for all of V's work. And kills an ogre.

[ferretchucker]

Yes yes, you'll all be in it. I'm probably going to go to bed soon so I'll write up the first episode in the morning.

[The_Return]

Mind if I elaborate mine a tad?

Instead of just being "evil", I'd rather be an agent of chaos type. The kind of character that just genuinely does not give a fuck about anyone or anything, and leaves nothing but destruction in his wake. The type that kills just to see the look on the other guy's face, and will probably laugh about it later.

[ferretchucker]

Mind if I elaborate mine a tad?

Instead of just being "evil", I'd rather be an agent of chaos type. The kind of character that just genuinely does not give a fuck about anyone or anything, and leaves nothing but destruction in his wake. The type that kills just to see the look on the other guy's face, and will probably laugh about it later.

Yeh. The joker is cool...

:p

[massacre man]

Yeh. The joker is cool...

:p

I want Return to kill me at the end. After I kill an ogre.

[roshiq]

I like to be a cursed wizard who is now look like a giant spider!:)

But still I'm a fortune teller & knows all the answers of weird riddles.:D

[crabapple]

Ohhh, it's creepy and scary already! :eek:

[Dante'sInferno]

This story is off to a great start!:D

[The_Return]

I...am...BADASS!!! :cool:

Keep up the good work man! :D

[fortunato]

ah, very nice.
the return is brutal!

[crabapple]

It's the most frightening penguin I have ever seen!

[_____V_____]

Good stuff.

Return stole the first episode comprehensively, but I am still waiting on my smartass moments.

[crabapple]

I think it's off to an exciting start and already it seems better than the previous ones.

[ferretchucker]

Yeh. Thanks. I'll be doing episodes every monday, friday and saturday if possible. Thanks for all the feedback and don't worry everyone who has requested to be in it.

If you look carefully gore, you may notice a foreshadowing of your character.

And Despare and V, your characters will be expanded on in the next few episodes.

[Dante'sInferno]

Amazing so far Ferret!I love it!

[pinkfloyd45769]

Its really good,you are so creative:)

[ferretchucker]

Thanks guys. NExt piece will be up thursday.

[Papillon Noir]

Great job so far, Ferret!

Can I be in it?

Maybe as a mysterious witch? :)

[crabapple]

Yeah...a mysterious old Hoochie Witch! That's the ticket.

Don't rush 'em on our account, Ferret, by the way; do 'em right. Make 'em good and scary. :eek:

[Papillon Noir]

Yeah...a mysterious old Hoochie Witch!

No, no, no. Young and sexy witch! :p

[ferretchucker]

young hoochie witch?

[Papillon Noir]

young and not slutty witch :D

[ferretchucker]

Young and slutty but self respecting witch?

[Papillon Noir]

Sure! Go for it! :p

[crabapple]

Yeah...good good, sexy witch is good. :cool: :rolleyes: ;) :eek:

[missmacabre]

I want to be Robin Hood, assuming Robin Hood was a chick and people just mistold the stories over the years. Or, you know, just a kick ass hunter. Specced beastmastery. LOL

[ferretchucker]

I'll make something like that happen.

[ferretchucker]

Really sorry to those who were looking forward to tonights episode. I've just got back to school yesterday and already have some coursework. I only have two more years and these are probably the most important years so far as the exam at the end of them determine our next step in life whether it's higher education or getting a job.

Anyway, I have some work to do for Drama which is writing a script to be performed on MONDAY! I haven't had dinner, just got back from fire cadets. Anyway, what I'm getting at is I can't do it tonight. But I'll do an extra long one tommorow!

[Posher778]

I want to be an evil bad ass rocker.

[pinkfloyd45769]

I'm pissed off!!!I came here to read the damn soap...what the hell???You are neglecting us!!!I came here for a nice story,what did i get???NOTHING!!!!






kidding:)
Good luck on the homework:)

[Disease]

First chance I've had to have a look at this, you can give me a character if it isn't to late, just make sure I return from the dead at some point.

[ferretchucker]

First chance I've had to have a look at this, you can give me a character if it isn't to late, just make sure I return from the dead at some point.

Sure, you can be in it.

[Disease]

So is Geddy the devil?

[Dante'sInferno]

Amazing so far!Like i said,you have a gift.

[ferretchucker]

So is Geddy the devil?

Not quite...

[hammerfan]

Awesome as usual, FC!

[roshiq]

Amazing so far!Like i said,you have a gift.

Ditto.

Superb! Carry on....

(Waiting for the cursed wizard!:) )

[ferretchucker]

Ah, Rohiq, maybe you should read your first post in this thread, the read the bit about the nutcase...

A Bonus episode by way of apology for me missing last night will be up soon. I think I'll carry on like this, doing an episode on Mondays, Fridays and Saturdays.

[Dante'sInferno]

Great.Alot more to come.



I can't wait.:D

[hammerfan]

Fantastic, FC!!!!

[ferretchucker]

Thanks. I felt bad for killing the dog. Almost like killing a part of me :P

But it had to be done. To show the tension between the two.

Glad you like it and don't miss tommorows episode!

[_____V_____]

Very interesting, little one. Keep going!

[monalisa]

Wow! I just read the whole thing tonight. I'm hooked. Great work!

[ferretchucker]

Thanks all of you. I'm planning to carry this on until around November time when there will be a BIG finale.

Thanks for the support, it really helps.

Next episode is up TONIGHT!

[Papillon Noir]

Great job, Ferret! I'm interested to see where this is going.

[Dante'sInferno]

It just keeps getting better and better.Awesome!

[ferretchucker]

THe next episode will be up some time tomorrow night. DON'T MISS IT! A whole load of new characters will be introduced.

[monalisa]

Keep up the good work Ferret! Very interesting reading!

[ferretchucker]

Thanks.

And if anyone has any requests for their characters I'll try to work them into the story.

Next episode is up...TONIGHT!

[Papillon Noir]

I'm the Daughter of Satan.....awesome! :D

Real nice story so far, Ferret. :)

[ferretchucker]

Thanks. And useful name. Fits in with the character well!

[hammerfan]

Thanks.

And if anyone has any requests for their characters I'll try to work them into the story.

Next episode is up...TONIGHT!


Whatever you want to do is fine with me. Great story!!

[ferretchucker]

Really sorry I didn't do it last night. my brother came round and he has no internet so I let him use my computer. Hopefully I'll do one tonight!

[crabapple]

My God! Now that is damn creepy.

[pinkfloyd45769]

Is that it for my character? If you can tell me that is;)

[Elvis_Christ]

That story needed more nudity and violence :)

[ferretchucker]

Is that it for my character? If you can tell me that is;)

Heck no! Each character will be expanded on. Most will get their own episode. There's lots to come!

[Papillon Noir]

Heck no! Each character will be expanded on. Most will get their own episode. There's lots to come!

.....Yay! :)

[Doc Faustus]

Looking pretty good so far. Can I be a dark, broody but well intentioned young necromancer /doctor who just wants his dead wife back? A decent, but overzealous doctor Frankenstein type.

[X¤MurderDoll¤X]

That story needed more nudity and violence :)

agreed, you can't tell a story without nudity and violence.

[bloody_ribcut]

to the sex scene!

[ferretchucker]

agreed, you can't tell a story without nudity and violence.

:eek:

Dolly is Rob Zombie!

[ferretchucker]

I know I haven't really been keeping to my episode dates but once again, I have to apologise. I'm going to a party tonight where I plan to stay until tomorrow. Sorry guys.

[Papillon Noir]

HAHAHAHA! Chrono's cat makes an appearance, that's awesome! :p :D

[crabapple]

It's a cavalcade of HDC stars!

[Dante'sInferno]

Great so far!I loved it that Chrono's cat made in appearance!

[phantomstranger]

I'm in, Can I be a vampire or a pirate or something fun like that?

[monalisa]

OMG! I love it! I haven't been on all week (busy with work and my dad, he's doing MUCH better,YAY!). But I just caught up to 9/14, and I love my character! Thank you Ferret and Dante! I'm still giggling about "... A small, white, fluffy dog walks up to her and jumps onto her lap. She begins stroking it."

Now I must read about Chrono's kitty!

This is SO much fun to read!

[monalisa]

Now I'm laughing even harder! I don't know which I like better...

V: Same to you Gore. Honestly, this town is nuttier than a squirrels dream.

Or

Chronogrl: Who's a good little creature? YOU ARE!


Funny and creepy, great combo! Keep it coming FC!

[ferretchucker]

Thanks guys. And sure Phantom Stranger, you can be in it.

Tonights episode will follow Gore, just after V left. We will also find out the mysterious person who has been mentioned. The one who V has been tasked to kill and is giving power to the creatures.

[monalisa]

Gore is bustling around. He's got a big sack ...

I never knew. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) :D

Keep up the great work FC!

[roshiq]

Wow! I love my intro:) .

Great going, FC!

[ferretchucker]

I never knew. (Sorry, I couldn't resist.) :D

Keep up the great work FC!
Yeh, when I proof read it I noticed that but i decided not to change it.

[Dante'sInferno]

Keep up the great work FC!

[Dante'sInferno]

Really great!

[Doc Faustus]

Pretty prime stuff. Your pacing and sense of suspense are getting really strong.

[ferretchucker]

thanks. I really appreciate all comments. They're what keep me going.

[The_Return]

Man, you just keep making me more badass by the day - I love it!!


...


Oh yeah, and the parts with the other people are pretty good too, I guess...;) :p

[phantomstranger]

This is so cool.

[Freak]

Great job so far FC.I hope I get a little more action later on.

[ferretchucker]

Great job so far FC.I hope I get a little more action later on.

Oh you wait, I have BIG things planned for you!

[ferretchucker]

Sorry guys, but as I'm going to egypt, I shan't be posting another episode until NEXT SATURDAY! Once again, sorry.

[ferretchucker]

Not a single reply?

:(

[Papillon Noir]

Not a single reply?

:(

I literally just read it. I'm glad to see you're still working on this. The story is coming along great. I'm sure everyone is looking forward to how this will turn out, especially those of us who are in it. :)

[Dante'sInferno]

I literally just read it. I'm glad to see you're still working on this. The story is coming along great. I'm sure everyone is looking forward to how this will turn out, especially those of us who are in it. :)I am!I can't wait untill it's finished!

[roshiq]

You just carry on FC! I'm sure everyone here is glad to be a part of this amazing story! I'm loving it!:)

[crabapple]

It is an awesome horror soap...it is like the new Dark Shadows or something!

[Dante'sInferno]

It's great!I'm loving the build-up.:D

[crabapple]

Yes, and remember, Crabapple's cameo was not enough. He needs to come back with more of his apple orchard wisdom. :rolleyes:

[ferretchucker]

Remember what I said, each HDC based character should hopefully get their own episode.

[crabapple]

Yes yes! Yes, yes. That exciting :D

[roshiq]

Continue please..:)

[Doc Faustus]

Remember what I said, each HDC based character should hopefully get their own episode.

Was my character approved?

[ferretchucker]

I can't remember? Have you been in it yet?


Everyone who hasn't been in it and wants to be just leave a coment, I'll write you into tomorrow's episode.

[Doc Faustus]

Not as of yet. I'd like to be a well-intentioned, generally helpful alchemist who's interested in raising the dead to bring back his deceased wife but does not see how necromancy is inappropriate and dangerous.

[ferretchucker]

That could fit in well...

[Psycom5k]

I'd like to be in it as well. I'll pm you.

[ferretchucker]

Sure. That's fine. I'll write you all in.

Oh, and fortunato, I know you asked to be in. You're gonna be introduced soon.

[Psycom5k]

Pm sent, send me one back and tell me what you think.

[fortunato]

Sure. That's fine. I'll write you all in.

Oh, and fortunato, I know you asked to be in. You're gonna be introduced soon.

ah, excellent! i've been reading along, so i can't wait.

[hammerfan]

I've spent most of the afternoon getting caught up. I can't believe how far behind I got!

FC, this is awesome! I love that you put Chrono's cat in it! Excellent! :D Chrono and I are sisters :D

[Papillon Noir]

Nice episode, Ferret. :)

[ferretchucker]

Thanks Hammerfan and Paps.

Hammer: Yep! And you're the smart one!

Paps (yes, I still say paps): Thanks. And don't worry, you will be back!

[Doc Faustus]

Good cliffhanger.

[Dante'sInferno]

Amazing!I love where this is going!:D

[The Flayed One]

If it's not too late, fit me in too. I'd prefer to be a drunken ex-maniacal bastard who's too depressed to do anything evil because he doesn't think evil is pure anymore.

If not, I'll take what I can get.

[Papillon Noir]

Paps (yes, I still say paps): Thanks. And don't worry, you will be back!

Yay! :D I was going to ask you if I was going to make another appearance :)



The Return: The lives of fools are simply the nipples of man. Pointless.

LOL :p

[ferretchucker]

LOL :p


I liked that bit too!

[Psycom5k]

Nice ones FC, Sorry I wasn't around to read them earlier but I did now. :)

[ferretchucker]

Nice ones FC, Sorry I wasn't around to read them earlier but I did now. :)

Good to hear.

Everybody else enjoying them?

[hammerfan]

Good to hear.

Everybody else enjoying them?


Absolutely! Sorry I was quiet today - I ended up leaving work with a migraine.

[pinkfloyd45769]

I really like em FC...like it more if i'm in it again:)


Just kidding:)

[roshiq]

Who aren't enjoying this fast paced, action packed gruesome story? More & more awesomeness in every episodes!:)

[Doc Faustus]

You're getting extremely good at placing your cliffhangers. Good work.

[alkytrio666]

Good chapter!

[Psycom5k]

Nice episode, though I'm kinda confused about the storyline cause at one point it left off with my charactor getting introduced into it and it was all creepy and such and then bam drunken bar fun. Not complaining mind you, just... constructive criticism? Though i could be missing something.

[ferretchucker]

Yeh, that was a mistake on my part. I wrote the episode last night without thinking. I had to try and recover it with this by saying that the mission would happen that day instead. Although I have thought of somethings (some which won't be revealed until the end of the series) which do fit better now. Don't worry, tomorrow, you will get your big starring role!

[Doc Faustus]

You can always seek out the Retconomicon.

[ferretchucker]

You can always seek out the Retconomicon.

Ha! That was actually pretty good!

[Psycom5k]

Yeh, that was a mistake on my part. I wrote the episode last night without thinking. I had to try and recover it with this by saying that the mission would happen that day instead. Although I have thought of somethings (some which won't be revealed until the end of the series) which do fit better now. Don't worry, tomorrow, you will get your big starring role!

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

[pinkfloyd45769]

Good stuff,like always:)

[pinkfloyd45769]

Good stuff buddy:)

[Psycom5k]

Man.... I'm always made out to be stupid...lol

Nice one though Ferret. :)

[ferretchucker]

Man.... I'm always made out to be stupid...lol

Nice one though Ferret. :)

Not stupid, just...not as advanced in the vocabulary department. Remember, you can speak to dragons.

[Psycom5k]

Not stupid, just...not as advanced in the vocabulary department. Remember, you can speak to dragons.

Yeah true, but I swear, I thought the next words coming out of my mouth were gonna be "Baby RUth!" or "I love you chunk!"

[Dante'sInferno]

Amazing!I love each episode more and more!

[The Flayed One]

You just wait until I get in here! There will be awesome abound!

[missmacabre]

Yeah true, but I swear, I thought the next words coming out of my mouth were gonna be "Baby RUth!" or "I love you chunk!"

hahahaha. oh dear christ I love you! Amazing. you dont even know how hard I just laughed.

[Psycom5k]

hahahaha. oh dear christ I love you! Amazing. you dont even know how hard I just laughed.

Yes I do, I watched you through the window.... I mean.... ignore the man in the bushes!

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[Psycom5k]

Nice episode there FC. Keep it up.

[ferretchucker]

I will try. And the next episode will ALSO be set on that night. This time, from the point of Monalisa and also the creatures.

[pinkfloyd45769]

Its really good,i just want to keep reading.

[phantomstranger]

This is so cool. You have one hell of a talent

[ferretchucker]

Thanks everyone, you can't imagine how much all of this support means to me.

[Doc Faustus]

Nice job! Looking forward to the next few episodes.

[Dante'sInferno]

Badass!I can't wait to read the next episodes!

[Psycom5k]

Keep it up FC. You're doing a good job dude.

[Papillon Noir]

Wow, you've been busy this weekend, Ferret! Great job! Looking forward to the finale! :)

[ferretchucker]

Thanks. I've been trying to cram loads of episodes in lately so that I get the Halloween deadline. Dunno if I'll make it though.

Glad to know you're reading though. And if anyone else is who doesn't make comments often, PLEASE DO! I like to know who my readers are.

P.S - The next episode will be centred around Crabapple.

[hammerfan]

I haven't wanted it to stop!

[Doc Faustus]

This looks like trouble.

[Dante'sInferno]

Getting more and more amazing!:D

[Psycom5k]

Crabapple has to be my favorite charactor.... I was laughing this entire..... episode? I dunno what to call it.

[Dante'sInferno]

Dear god this is getting awesome.I love where it's going!

[hammerfan]

Truly fantastic, FC - and I love the part with Crabapple! Too funny!

[ferretchucker]

Crabapple has to be my favorite charactor.... I was laughing this entire..... episode? I dunno what to call it.

Yep, I'd call it an episode. ;)


And thanks everyone else!

[phantomstranger]

YES!! COOL!! I have a hook! I"m loving this story.

[Papillon Noir]

This is really getting good, Ferret! I sense my reappearance soon! :D

[ferretchucker]

Oh yes my friend. There will be one more episode tonight and then, tomorrow, the final episodes will be released!!! I have no idea how many there will be. Me and Dante have been discussing it and from what I can tell, there will be LOADS!

[pinkfloyd45769]

Good shit lil man:)

[hammerfan]

Awesome.....amazing.....incredible....fantastic. I'm going to be very sad when it's done.

[Dante'sInferno]

........................:D

[Papillon Noir]

OMG! This just keeps getting better and better. :D

[ferretchucker]

No Comments?

:(

[Papillon Noir]

Oh, this is so good! I can't wait for the next episode!

And there's zombies, yay! :D

[Dante'sInferno]

Getting more and more awesome!:D

[crabapple]

Yarrrrrgh! It's a tale of pure horror! :D

[hammerfan]

Gabe, in all seriousness, this is the best story I've read in a long time. I can't wait for the next one!

[ferretchucker]

Thanks. Your support did not go unnoticed! :D

And you'll be back. And maybe...just maybe...you'll have a little friend. ;)

[massacre man]

I've been reading but have waited to post.

Fuckin' nice, buddy.

[ferretchucker]

Thanks. Glad to know there are other people reading it!

[Dante'sInferno]

Amazing Gabe!I'm glad I could help!Can't wait to start the next one.:D


Simply,amazing story.:)

[Doc Faustus]

Excellent work! A good, moving ending.

[_____V_____]

I just sat down and read through all the episodes.

Very insightful and creative, my young whippersnapper. You have the vivid imagination of a J K Rowling...keep up the wonderful work.

[ferretchucker]

Thankyou EVERYONE! I do it all for you and I'm really glad you've all enjoyed it.

[pinkfloyd45769]

Its so hard to believe that you are as a young as you are.This has been the best thing thing that i have read in a long time.I can't wait to read the next one,i hope its up soon.I am really blown away by the talent you have.Thanks for keeping me entertained;)

[ferretchucker]

You're very welcome! :D

[monalisa]

I just got caught up reading all from where I last read it, I hadn't realized it's been so long. Excellent work ferret, you are quite talented! Quite unique how you tied all the characters together. I truly enjoyed reading it all. Hope this isn't the last we've heard. :)

[roshiq]

I haven't read this kinda stories before. I was only fond of detective, horror & sci fi genre of literature & movies. But man, honestly speaking..this just blown me away. Amazing stuff...there were magic, horror, betrayal, blood, zombie, love...all sorts of awesomeness! I wish every success for your talent.

As the air blows by, a chilling sound is heard. Roshiq's laughter. Ending credits role.[/I]

Wow! what an ending!;)

[ferretchucker]

Glad you both liked it. It really does make me smile knowing that I've entertained this many people. Thank you all for reading this.


P.S - Glad you liked the ending Roshiq!

[phantomstranger]

BRAVO! BRAVO! (and thanks for including me in the story)

[ferretchucker]

BRAVO! BRAVO! (and thanks for including me in the story)

Thank you and you're welcome.

[Papillon Noir]

I just got caught up on this from Friday and wow, Ferret, this really turned out awesome! :) This was so creative, and I love the twist at the end and how all the characters came together, especially mine of course! ;) It's really been great reading this and I look forward to your next adventure. :D

[ferretchucker]

I just got caught up on this from Friday and wow, Ferret, this really turned out awesome! :) This was so creative, and I love the twist at the end and how all the characters came together, especially mine of course! ;) It's really been great reading this and I look forward to your next adventure. :D

Glad you've enjoyed it my friend! And your character will show up from time to time!

[ferretchucker]

Just copied this to Word incase anything ever happens to HDC and it took up 97 pages at size 12 Times New Roman!!! Way longer than I realized.

Series 2 will be up around October depending on when the Superhero story concludes. Many characters will be returning (possibly from beyond the grave) and the members who weren't in it/ died and won't be returning will have the option to be a new character should they so choose.

Oh, and I realized I promised to include MissMacabre and never did. I'll be doing it next series. Do you want to be the same character you outlined or a new one?

[massacre man]

Just copied this to Word incase anything ever happens to HDC and it took up 97 pages at size 12 Times New Roman!!! Way longer than I realized.

Series 2 will be up around October depending on when the Superhero story concludes. Many characters will be returning (possibly from beyond the grave) and the members who weren't in it/ died and won't be returning will have the option to be a new character should they so choose.

Oh, and I realized I promised to include MissMacabre and never did. I'll be doing it next series. Do you want to be the same character you outlined or a new one?

I want to be armed with only a fire ax and still kick ass.

[ferretchucker]

I want to be armed with only a fire ax and still kick ass.

That will fit in very nicely with the story.

[massacre man]

That will fit in very nicely with the story.

Also I want to carry at least a snack in one of my pockets at all times. In case I lose energy from all the swingin'.

[ferretchucker]

Also I want to carry at least a snack in one of my pockets at all times. In case I lose energy from all the swingin'.

Well seeing as you are the town butcher, a few pigs ears and tails in your pockets would be expected.

[Freak]

So whatever happend to my charachter?

[ferretchucker]

So whatever happend to my charachter?

He was freed of his disfigurement and mental disabilities when Jeremiah Dante claimed his godly powers, which had been stored in Freak until a time when Dante would need them. After this, he and his mother Monalisa were reunited. He continues to live in the town.

If there is anything particular that you would like to happen to the character, tell me and I'll try to work it in. He was unfortunate in that although it was a key role, his part in the first series was small. However, the next series will be able to feature him much more prominently.

[_____V_____]

Just read through the entire story again, and its pretty amazing how much creative talent went into making this such a wonderful period piece.

Taking out the story posts to turn them into a Sticky for the Horror Fiction forum, Ferret. Had forgotten entirely about this.

You can bet your last dime I ll be very eager for #2, whether I return or not.

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Just read through the entire story again, and its pretty amazing how much creative talent went into making this such a wonderful period piece.

Taking out the story posts to turn them into a Sticky for the Horror Fiction forum, Ferret. Had forgotten entirely about this.

You can bet your last dime I ll be very eager for #2, whether I return or not.

Thanks V, I appreciate it!

And with your character's discovery of his...heritage, you can be sure he'll have some cool stuff to do in the future! :D

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Anyone else who wants to remind themselves of their character or even reread the enitre piece as V did, you can look in the Horror Fiction forum (courtesy of V :)) or click the link in my signature.